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SAKURA Skip [Insane]]2016-10-09 21:42 Kashima: ok :32016-10-09 21:43 SherryCherry: well2016-10-09 21:43 SherryCherry: 00:05:607 (8) - nc2016-10-09 21:44 SherryCherry: 00:07:970 (5,6) - flow ugly2016-10-09 21:44 Kashima: got it2016-10-09 21:45 Kashima: a stress here so i place them as anti-flow2016-10-09 21:45 SherryCherry: http:\/\/puu.sh\/rDbao\/3985b346a2.png2016-10-09 21:45 SherryCherry: try this2016-10-09 21:46 SherryCherry: 00:08:697 (8) - also move it somewhere2016-10-09 21:46 SherryCherry: 00:09:788 (1,2,3,4) - 1\/22016-10-09 21:47 SherryCherry: two sliders is better2016-10-09 21:47 SherryCherry: for rhytm2016-10-09 21:47 SherryCherry: and music2016-10-09 21:47 SherryCherry: rhythm*2016-10-09 21:47 SherryCherry: 00:08:516 (7) - nc2016-10-09 21:48 Kashima: 00:09:788 (1,2,3,4) - fixed2016-10-09 21:49 SherryCherry: 00:11:607 (9) - nc2016-10-09 21:49 SherryCherry: 00:13:425 (6) - slider for vocal2016-10-09 21:51 SherryCherry: 00:35:243 (7,8,9,10,11) - overmap2016-10-09 21:51 SherryCherry: 00:35:334 (8,9,10) - there is not sounds2016-10-09 21:52 SherryCherry: 00:35:243 (7,8,9,10,11) - replace it with 2 sliders2016-10-09 21:52 Kashima: got it2016-10-09 21:53 SherryCherry: 00:54:879 (3) - 1\/2 lsider2016-10-09 21:53 SherryCherry: slider*2016-10-09 21:53 SherryCherry: 00:56:334 (1) - ^2016-10-09 21:54 SherryCherry: 00:59:425 (2,4,2) - remove2016-10-09 21:56 SherryCherry: aesthetics is bad :c2016-10-09 21:56 SherryCherry: need more work2016-10-09 21:56 Kashima: ;w;2016-10-09 21:56 SherryCherry: ACTION is editing [https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/b\/1100237 fourfolium - SAKURA Skip [Hard]]2016-10-09 21:57 SherryCherry: 00:01:970 (8,9) - cntrl+g2016-10-09 21:58 SherryCherry: hmm2016-10-09 21:58 SherryCherry: 00:05:243 (9) - 2 sliders2016-10-09 21:58 SherryCherry: 00:05:970 (10) - same2016-10-09 21:58 SherryCherry: 00:05:970 (10) - nc2016-10-09 21:58 SherryCherry: 00:08:879 (9) - ugly shape2016-10-09 21:59 SherryCherry: 00:48:879 (6) - ^2016-10-09 22:00 SherryCherry: 00:39:425 (2,1) - fix stack2016-10-09 22:01 SherryCherry: ACTION is editing [https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/b\/1100238 fourfolium - SAKURA Skip [Normal]]2016-10-09 22:01 SherryCherry: 00:13:970 (1,2) - blanket2016-10-09 22:02 SherryCherry: normal is nice btw2016-10-09 22:02 Kashima: thx ><2016-10-09 22:03 Kashima: my mod is editing.i will post it later!2016-10-09 22:03 Kashima: thx for modding!2016-10-09 22:03 SherryCherry: ar 5 in normal2016-10-09 22:04 Kashima: got it2016-10-09 22:04 SherryCherry: try cs 32016-10-09 22:05 SherryCherry: more aesthetically2016-10-09 22:05 SherryCherry: od 4 hp 42016-10-09 22:06 Kashima: ok2016-10-09 22:06 SherryCherry: lower diffs is good for me2016-10-09 22:06 SherryCherry: but insane and hard :\/2016-10-09 22:06 SherryCherry: more work2016-10-09 22:07 SherryCherry: okay2016-10-09 22:07 SherryCherry: That's all2016-10-09 22:07 Kashima: thx for modding!<\/pre><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n AzureDoctor<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 196 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2016<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n AzureDoctor<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-10-09T18:35:29+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n NM [General]Your background picture is 1500x1069. You should resize it to 1366x768.[Hard]Fix the following blankets(I'll just point out the ones that are really off): 00:05:061 (8,9) - 00:11:061 (6,7) - 00:27:061 (1,2) - 00:37:243 (2,4) - 00:47:607 (1,4) - 00:50:334 (3,4) - 00:52:697 (3,4) - 01:03:425 (1,2) - 01:04:880 (1,3) - 01:06:152 (5,1) - 01:13:788 (1,5) - 01:19:425 (1,3) - 01:20:879 (1,2) - 00:01:061 (4) - NC00:03:607 (1) - Remove NC, add NC here instead: 00:03:970 (3) - 00:05:243 (9) - NC00:10:152 (2) - You could make this parallel to 00:08:879 (9) - as well. It looks weird on its own.00:13:970 (5) - NC00:23:061 (5) - ^00:26:879 (6,1) - I think this should use normal DS. There isn't anything here that suggests a jump.00:36:516 (1) - Remove NC00:37:061 (1) - ^00:40:152 (1) - ^00:42:334 (1) - ^00:43:425 (1) - Why not put this in the same place as the end of 00:42:334 (1) - ? Right now it's just sticking out and it looks weird.00:45:788 (4) - Normal DS could be used here. There's nothing here that could suggest a jump.00:59:243 (1,2,3,4) - I think a bigger spacing could be used for all of these, instead of the increasing spacing.01:00:334 (4) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the song I think a hitsound could be added to the slider end(maybe a clap).01:05:425 (2) - No need for a larger DS here. It's also kind of awkward to play.01:08:334 (2) - ^01:11:243 (2) - ^01:11:788 (2) - You could make this line up with 01:11:425 (3,1) - , maybe.01:12:516 (5) - I don't think the jump needs to be that big.01:17:061 (2) - Use Normal DS01:19:970 (2) - ^01:22:879 (2) - ^01:26:516 (1,2) - This is hard to read when it's placed around the other set of notes. You should move it so that the other pattern doesn't go through it.Good luck! <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kashima<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 154 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kashima<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-10-09T19:26:09+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Annika Flina wrote:<\/h4>NM [General]Your background picture is 1500x1069. You should resize it to 1366x768.!!!!thx!!!!<\/span>[Hard]Fix the following blankets(I'll just point out the ones that are really off): 00:05:061 (8,9) - 00:11:061 (6,7) - 00:27:061 (1,2) - 00:37:243 (2,4) - 00:47:607 (1,4) - 00:50:334 (3,4) - 00:52:697 (3,4) - 01:03:425 (1,2) - 01:04:880 (1,3) - 01:06:152 (5,1) - 01:13:788 (1,5) - 01:19:425 (1,3) - 01:20:879 (1,2) - I'll recheck all my blanket!thx for checking!<\/span><\/span>All fixed<\/a>00:01:061 (4) - NC00:03:607 (1) - Remove NC, add NC here instead: 00:03:970 (3) - 00:05:243 (9) - NC00:10:152 (2) - You could make this parallel to 00:08:879 (9) - as well. It looks weird on its own.00:13:970 (5) - NC00:23:061 (5) - ^00:26:879 (6,1) - I think this should use normal DS. There isn't anything here that suggests a jump.00:36:516 (1) - Remove NC00:37:061 (1) - ^00:40:152 (1) - ^00:42:334 (1) - ^00:43:425 (1) - Why not put this in the same place as the end of 00:42:334 (1) - ? Right now it's just sticking out and it looks weird.00:45:788 (4) - Normal DS could be used here. There's nothing here that could suggest a jump.00:59:243 (1,2,3,4) - I think a bigger spacing could be used for all of these, instead of the increasing spacing.01:00:334 (4) - Since there is a cymbal sound in the song I think a hitsound could be added to the slider end(maybe a clap).01:05:425 (2) - No need for a larger DS here. It's also kind of awkward to play.01:08:334 (2) - ^01:11:243 (2) - ^01:11:788 (2) - You could make this line up with 01:11:425 (3,1) - , maybe.01:12:516 (5) - I don't think the jump needs to be that big.01:17:061 (2) - Use Normal DS01:19:970 (2) - ^01:22:879 (2) - ^01:26:516 (1,2) - This is hard to read when it's placed around the other set of notes. You should move it so that the other pattern doesn't go through it.<\/div><\/div>Good luck! <\/blockquote><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Battle<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,865 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Battle<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-10-09T20:57:47+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/a><\/center>[General]Turn on widescreen on insane to make it consistent w\/ other difficulties[Easy]00:06:334 (5) - It might be better to make the note on 00:06:334 - a regular hitcircle and have the downbeat 00:06:879 - clickable, this is so there's clear indication that a separate section of the intro is starting00:07:607 (2,3,4) - Maybe try rhythm like this?<\/a>. It's somewhat weird to have 2 as a repeat as it goes over the beat on 00:08:879 - , and it seems like you were following that rhythm00:09:788 (5) - NC here? It seems like you're going for an NC every two downbeats00:14:879 (4,5,1,2,3) - Try to avoid having a long chain for hit circles on an easy, it can be quite difficult for beginners, try add a 1\/1 slider on 00:15:607 - 00:24:334 (1,2) - Blanket is off, it would also help if you didn't make this movement in such a sharp angle, it's best to have simplistic flow for easier difficulties in my opinion00:27:243 (5) - NC00:32:334 (3) - Try to find a way to make the beat on 00:32:879 - clickable, it is an extremely strong beat, but it only falls on a repeat, making it very under-emphasized00:36:697 (1) - Remove NC00:40:334 (1) - ^00:44:697 (5) - NC00:50:516 (4) - ^00:56:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing about the hit circles, it can be quite difficult for newer players to be repeatedly single-tapping, the shape can also confuse players since they won't know where to click[Normal]Unlike Easy, I will not point out the NC inconsistencies, just try to keep a pattern with how you NC things (for example, an NC on every other downbeat which is what you do for the most part)00:00:334 - to 00:03:970 - You should try to keep ds consistent throughout this part, the ds kinda goes all over the place here00:13:970 (1,2) - DS is off, fix blanket 00:22:697 (4,5,6) - Patterns like this can tend to be rather confusing for beginners, since the slider end is closer to the last clicked note, players will often assume that that is what they need to click next, leading to a broken combo00:26:516 (3,1,2) - This can get rather confusing for beginners fairly quickly, 1 is extremely far away compared to 2, and people may want to click 2 instead since it's closer. , you should be trying to keep DS consistent still in normals00:39:425 (2,2) - Try to avoid overlaps00:43:970 (3,1) - Similar to what was pointed out before, try to avoid doing things like this, where the slider ends or repeats look like it could be the next note, keeps slider ends or repeats away from the previous notes ensure players won't mistake it as the slider head, and will overall make your map more beginner friendly00:57:061 (2,3) - DS, again, like the NCs I won't point them all out, but your DS should remain fairly consistent throughout the Normals. Very small jumps are fine on normals, but extremely large jumps in DS like this are not acceptable[Hard]00:01:061 (4) - Try placing your NCs on every downbeat at this point. The rhythm is dense enough to place an NC at each downbeat00:05:061 (8,9) - Fix blanket please00:39:425 (2,1) - Maybe stack properly for neatness sake?00:40:697 (2,4,5,1) - A pattern like this is quite difficult to read, even for hard players, making it a bit more clear for hard players helps improve playability00:57:788 (1,2,3,4) - This feels somewhat inconsistent with the way that you've been doing 1\/4 repeats, since usually you do something like 01:01:425 (2,3) - which looks a lot neater01:02:698 (3,4) - On a related note, make sure you're careful with things like this and 01:01:425 (2,3) - , both look extremely similar, and can cause players to misread due to misinterpretation[Insane]00:13:970 (1,2) - If you choose to keep the extended sliders like this, please add an inherited point with a soft sample to mute the slider on the blue tick (it would look something like this<\/a>00:20:516 (4,5,6,7,8) - Be careful with sharp angles like this, it can be quite hard to pull off and puts a lot of emphasis on beats00:52:334 (7,8,1,2,1,2) - Spacing like this can get rather confusing since you have anti-jumps, try to make it so there's more distance between 00:52:879 (2,1) - for a bit more readability00:59:060 (4) - Unsnapped slider end01:21:607 (3,4,5,6,7) - Similar, it's weird to go from a straight line triplet into straight line single tapping with small ds, especially during the kiai01:23:243 (2,3,4) - It may be a little hard for people to read this, consider moving 4 elsewhereOverall I'm pretty impressed with the rhythm used for the lower diffsGL<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kashima<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 154 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kashima<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-10-10T00:12:17+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Battle wrote:<\/h4><\/a><\/center>Kawaii\u2197<\/span>[General]Turn on widescreen on insane to make it consistent w\/ other difficulties<\/span>Easy fixing!<\/a>[Easy](All Fixed except \"*\")<\/span>00:06:334 (5) - It might be better to make the note on 00:06:334 - a regular hitcircle and have the downbeat 00:06:879 - clickable, this is so there's clear indication that a separate section of the intro is starting00:07:607 (2,3,4) - Maybe try rhythm like this?<\/a>. It's somewhat weird to have 2 as a repeat as it goes over the beat on 00:08:879 - , and it seems like you were following that rhythm00:09:788 (5) - NC here? It seems like you're going for an NC every two downbeats00:14:879 (4,5,1,2,3) - Try to avoid having a long chain for hit circles on an easy, it can be quite difficult for beginners, try add a 1\/1 slider on 00:15:607 - 00:24:334 (1,2) - Blanket is off, it would also help if you didn't make this movement in such a sharp angle, it's best to have simplistic flow for easier difficulties in my opinion00:27:243 (5) - NC00:32:334 (3) - Try to find a way to make the beat on 00:32:879 - clickable, it is an extremely strong beat, but it only falls on a repeat, making it very under-emphasized*<\/span>00:36:697 (1) - Remove NC00:40:334 (1) - ^00:44:697 (5) - NC00:50:516 (4) - ^00:56:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing about the hit circles, it can be quite difficult for newer players to be repeatedly single-tapping, the shape can also confuse players since they won't know where to click<\/div><\/div><\/span>Normal all fixed!<\/a>[Normal]Unlike Easy, I will not point out the NC inconsistencies, just try to keep a pattern with how you NC things (for example, an NC on every other downbeat which is what you do for the most part)00:00:334 - to 00:03:970 - You should try to keep ds consistent throughout this part, the ds kinda goes all over the place here00:13:970 (1,2) - DS is off, fix blanket 00:22:697 (4,5,6) - Patterns like this can tend to be rather confusing for beginners, since the slider end is closer to the last clicked note, players will often assume that that is what they need to click next, leading to a broken combo00:26:516 (3,1,2) - This can get rather confusing for beginners fairly quickly, 1 is extremely far away compared to 2, and people may want to click 2 instead since it's closer. , you should be trying to keep DS consistent still in normals00:39:425 (2,2) - Try to avoid overlaps00:43:970 (3,1) - Similar to what was pointed out before, try to avoid doing things like this, where the slider ends or repeats look like it could be the next note, keeps slider ends or repeats away from the previous notes ensure players won't mistake it as the slider head, and will overall make your map more beginner friendly00:57:061 (2,3) - DS, again, like the NCs I won't point them all out, but your DS should remain fairly consistent throughout the Normals. Very small jumps are fine on normals, but extremely large jumps in DS like this are not acceptable<\/div><\/div><\/span>Hard all fixed!<\/a>[Hard]00:01:061 (4) - Try placing your NCs on every downbeat at this point. The rhythm is dense enough to place an NC at each downbeat00:05:061 (8,9) - Fix blanket please00:39:425 (2,1) - Maybe stack properly for neatness sake?00:40:697 (2,4,5,1) - A pattern like this is quite difficult to read, even for hard players, making it a bit more clear for hard players helps improve playability00:57:788 (1,2,3,4) - This feels somewhat inconsistent with the way that you've been doing 1\/4 repeats, since usually you do something like 01:01:425 (2,3) - which looks a lot neater01:02:698 (3,4) - On a related note, make sure you're careful with things like this and 01:01:425 (2,3) - , both look extremely similar, and can cause players to misread due to misinterpretation<\/div><\/div><\/span>Insane all fixed!<\/a>[Insane]00:13:970 (1,2) - If you choose to keep the extended sliders like this, please add an inherited point with a soft sample to mute the slider on the blue tick (it would look something like this<\/a>Special Thx for this!Learned a lot!Thx!!!<\/span>00:20:516 (4,5,6,7,8) - Be careful with sharp angles like this, it can be quite hard to pull off and puts a lot of emphasis on beats00:52:334 (7,8,1,2,1,2) - Spacing like this can get rather confusing since you have anti-jumps, try to make it so there's more distance between 00:52:879 (2,1) - for a bit more readability00:59:060 (4) - Unsnapped slider end01:21:607 (3,4,5,6,7) - Similar, it's weird to go from a straight line triplet into straight line single tapping with small ds, especially during the kiai01:23:243 (2,3,4) - It may be a little hard for people to read this, consider moving 4 elsewhere<\/div><\/div>Overall I'm pretty impressed with the rhythm used for the lower diffsThx! <\/span>GL<\/blockquote><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lefia<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 674 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Lefia<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-10-10T14:31:47+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n From my queue<\/span>mod<\/a> 1gs1k