{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Vanillas<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 398 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Vanillas<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-06-18T17:48:21+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Megpoi wrote:<\/h4>[Easy]00:25:632 (2) - feels weird, consider moving to 00:25:801 (2) cuz you're following the background music more than the vocals Fixed<\/span>other than that, all seems good<\/blockquote>LeQuack wrote:<\/h4>M4M from my Queue<\/a> <\/span>Vanilla's Easy<\/a>00:22:430 (2,3) - Bring slider end of (2) down for better blanket Fixed<\/span>00:25:632 (2) - Because it is easy i would recommend having this start on next white tick (but end where it does currently) Fixed<\/span>00:32:542 (1,2) - I think these can be shaped differently for a better blanket Fixed<\/span>00:41:812 (2) - I would extend this to the next red tick as it makes it consistent with previous slider and matches the piano sound keep here, as I follow vocal this part<\/span>01:37:093 (2) - If brought down and to the left slightly it will be a better blanket Fixed<\/span>02:20:408 (3) - Maybe have the normal finish hitsound Fixed<\/span>02:25:801 (3) - This should be a 2\/1 slider to keep a simple rhythm keep here, as the rhythm follow the music and it's not difficult at all as slider on red tail.<\/span>02:27:149 (4) - Not as important as above but this can also be moved forward by 1 tick to also make the rhythm simple ^<\/span>03:13:329 (2) - Reduce this to previous red tick keep<\/span>03:21:419 (2) - Increase this to white tick I wanna follow finish hitsound at 03:22:261, so keep<\/span>03:33:891 (1) - Maybe have the whistle from the drum hitsounds on the end of this finally I use no hitsound here<\/span><\/div><\/div><\/blockquote>MadaoX wrote:<\/h4>[box=mod][Easy]00:25:632 (2) this slider should be move it to 00:25:801 cause there is a strong beat here 2\/1 lol, you're the 3rd person point out this. fixed<\/span>01:07:430 (1) Fix the blanket Fixed<\/span>02:25:801 (3) make the slider into 2\/1 keep, As I followed guitar here.<\/span>02:26:981 (4) move the slider to 02:27:149 cause there is a strong beat here and make the slider into 1 1\/2 ^<\/span>03:13:329 (2) make the slider into 1 1\/2 like this slider 03:16:026 (2) it will make a nice rhtym sure, fixed~<\/span><\/blockquote>Thanks a lot to all of you~~ <\/span>SPOILER<\/a>osu file format v14[General]AudioFilename: gift.mp3AudioLeadIn: 0PreviewTime: 52093Countdown: 0SampleSet: SoftStackLeniency: 0.7Mode: 0LetterboxInBreaks: 0EpilepsyWarning: 1WidescreenStoryboard: 1[Editor]Bookmarks: 52767,53441,85127,116138,116812,159284,170745,171419,192318DistanceSpacing: 1BeatDivisor: 2GridSize: 32TimelineZoom: 1.4[Metadata]Title:GiftTitleUnicode:\u30ae\u30d5\u30c8Artist:Kon NatsumiArtistUnicode:\u6606\u590f\u7f8eCreator:eclipselotusVersion:Vanillas's 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<\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Hylocereus<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 18 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2015<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Hylocereus<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-06-19T00:54:47+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n From #modreqs, really like this mapset !_! Didn't find too many things to complain about haha[Vanillas's Easy]00:36:419 (2) - I think this slider actually looks better without the second follow point, otherwise there's a bulge on the top that I find a little strange<\/li>02:47:711 - Don't think break is needed here (just leave empty), but it's fine either way<\/li><\/ol>[Normal]00:25:127 (2) - Move one tick left?<\/li>00:58:160 (1) - Move initial and follow point to x:194 y:51 and x:212 y:110 makes this slider look a little better in my opinion<\/li>02:09:284 (3) - There's a weird chime hitsound here that doesn't belong<\/li><\/ol>[Akitoshi's Hard]00:50:070 (1) - This slider is a little fast imo; change to 0.75x (or less)? 02:46:026 (1) is set to 0.9x, which I still think is a little too fast, but you can really tell the difference and I definitely think it fits better.<\/li>01:53:441 (1) - ^<\/li>02:47:711 (1) - I think the spinner isn't needed here; since the music is really quiet, I think just leaving it empty is already adequate.<\/li><\/ol>[Light Insane]00:25:127 (5) - Blanket off a little bit?<\/li>01:01:194 (2) - Maybe offset this note from (3) in the same way you've offset the other ones -- it seems inconsistent here<\/li>01:17:374 - I don't think the break is necessary, since it's a really short pause; you have a similar (and longer) pause at 02:47:711 but it's not a break either<\/li>03:26:812 (3) - I'd make this a 1\/1 slider<\/li><\/ol>[Insane]00:32:205 (6) - This ends on a yellow tick right now; it looks intentional but I think you want to extend it to the red tick, since I can't hear anything on the yellow one. Also I'd give it similar hitsounds to (5)<\/li><\/ol>[Light Extra]OD seems like it could be a little higher, but HP 7.5 is really high; maybe change to HP 7 instead?<\/li>00:13:666 (1) - This slider shape is a little weird for me; maybe smooth out the middle part a little bit imo. Same for the other sliders with this shape (like 03:01:531)<\/li>01:08:947 (1) - Positioning on this looks sort of strange; what about moving it to x:60 y:192 to make it more consistent with the stream before?<\/li>02:17:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Not sure if this is intentional, but the spacing varies from 0.63x to 1.06x. I'd adjust the notes a bit to make it more even (also 1,2,3 seem basically in a straight line compared to the rest of the notes, so maybe give them some more curve as well)<\/li><\/ol><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chihara Minori<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,239 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chihara Minori<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-06-19T02:21:16+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hylocereus wrote:<\/h4>From #modreqs, really like this mapset !_! Didn't find too many things to complain about haha[Normal]00:25:127 (2) - Move one tick left?<\/li>00:58:160 (1) - Move initial and follow point to x:194 y:51 and x:212 y:110 makes this slider look a little better in my opinion im confuse @-@ please use pic for this kind of mods<\/span><\/li>02:09:284 (3) - There's a weird chime hitsound here that doesn't belong<\/li><\/ol>[Light Insane]00:25:127 (5) - Blanket off a little bit?<\/li>01:01:194 (2) - Maybe offset this note from (3) in the same way you've offset the other ones -- it seems inconsistent here i think it just fine <\/span><\/li>01:17:374 - I don't think the break is necessary, since it's a really short pause; you have a similar (and longer) pause at 02:47:711 but it's not a break either fyi, 80% modder ask for a break there, but for the longer one its my map characteristic, so be it<\/span><\/li>03:26:812 (3) - I'd make this a 1\/1 slider i want to make varian by changeing directly to piano tiles sound, and its start<\/span> 03:26:981<\/li><\/ol>[Insane]00:32:205 (6) - This ends on a yellow tick right now; it looks intentional but I think you want to extend it to the red tick, since I can't hear anything on the yellow one. Also I'd give it similar hitsounds to (5)<\/li><\/ol>[Light Extra]OD seems like it could be a little higher, but HP 7.5 is really high; maybe change to HP 7 instead? the song is actually get in calm category and i want to keep interval between diffs consistent<\/span><\/li>00:13:666 (1) - This slider shape is a little weird for me; maybe smooth out the middle part a little bit imo. Same for the other sliders with this shape (like 03:01:531) alternate<\/span><\/li>01:08:947 (1) - Positioning on this looks sort of strange; what about moving it to x:60 y:192 to make it more consistent with the stream before? i dont really like straight stream <\/span><\/li>02:17:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Not sure if this is intentional, but the spacing varies from 0.63x to 1.06x. I'd adjust the notes a bit to make it more even (also 1,2,3 seem basically in a straight line compared to the rest of the notes, so maybe give them some more curve as well) alternate<\/span> <\/li><\/ol><\/blockquote>No Reply = FixedThanks for your mods~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Left<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,164 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Left<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-06-19T03:57:48+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n #modreq is dead but I came owo[Akitoshi san]01:12:992 (1) - is it error? there's no sound in music here but loud whistle sound..I can't know why.02:46:026 (1,2,3) - It would be or course not a problem for rank, but I felt map is a bit sleepy becaouse you didn't used any DS emphasis.. like here, you can use more DS because it's the highest tension of this song.map is super solid lol[light insane]NC is to long. it affects hp drain, so you should fix it. (I think like Hard diff is ok)00:17:374 (3,4) - can blanket for better shape00:25:801 (1,2) - looke not good. https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/5423022<\/a> ?00:32:542 (1,2,3,4) - It's light insane, you can give here emphasis with DS, now it's just unmatched.00:59:003 (2,3) - just stack pls. I think it's your style but it looks dirty in diffs lower than insane...01:24:790 (6,2) - this overlap.. lookes not good.[insane]00:00:520 (2,3) - can blanket better.00:11:981 (4,5,6,7) - why DS is lower than light insane?00:14:846 (5) - strong guitar sound at the end of slider? I think it's a misread of sound.00:15:351 (6,7) - strong finish sound at 7, you have to use DS in 6-7, not 5-6. you have to chech whole map according to it.->00:32:542 (1,2,1) - you did well here.00:21:250 (1,2) - this Distance is really hmm.. considering you used Distance like hard, it should be fixed.[momoco]00:06:587 (4,5,1) - ???01:06:419 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - too small jump considering your previous DS. while vocal is going really high.01:13:329 (1,2,3,4,1) - whistle is not suitable i think, and Just using slider here would be nice.I can't see hard extra..but I think highest diff is very good.song and SB is so beautiful! I hope this ranked.GL!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chihara Minori<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,239 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chihara Minori<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-06-19T05:12:54+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Left wrote:<\/h4>#modreq is dead but I came owo[light insane]NC is to long. it affects hp drain, so you should fix it. (I think like Hard diff is ok)00:17:374 (3,4) - can blanket for better shape00:25:801 (1,2) - looke not good. https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/5423022<\/a> ?00:32:542 (1,2,3,4) - It's light insane, you can give here emphasis with DS, now it's just unmatched.00:59:003 (2,3) - just stack pls. I think it's your style but it looks dirty in diffs lower than insane...01:24:790 (6,2) - this overlap.. lookes not good.[insane]00:00:520 (2,3) - can blanket better.00:11:981 (4,5,6,7) - why DS is lower than light insane? because i to ofc<\/span>00:14:846 (5) - strong guitar sound at the end of slider? I think it's a misread of sound. nope its fine<\/span>00:15:351 (6,7) - strong finish sound at 7, you have to use DS in 6-7, not 5-6. you have to chech whole map according to it. alternate<\/span>->00:32:542 (1,2,1) - you did well here.00:21:250 (1,2) - this Distance is really hmm.. considering you used Distance like hard, it should be fixed. its totally fine<\/span>[momoco]00:06:587 (4,5,1) - ???01:06:419 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - too small jump considering your previous DS. while vocal is going really high. alternate<\/span>01:13:329 (1,2,3,4,1) - whistle is not suitable i think, and Just using slider here would be nice. nope, i do this for personal reason<\/span>song and SB is so beautiful! I hope this ranked. I hope so .w.<\/span>GL!<\/blockquote>No Reply = FixedThanks for the mod~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Lully<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,270 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Lully<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-06-19T12:17:31+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n m4mmaybe use a little bit sharper bg? looks weird with this hq sb lol<\/span>normal<\/a>00:00:857 (3) - blanket error00:05:913 (1,2,3) - this looks so overmapped..00:16:026 (5) - blanket error00:36:082 (5) - sllllllllllight ^00:57:823 (5) - ^01:43:328 (4) - avoid overlap01:45:688 (4) - make this straight after 3<\/div><\/div>i coudn't find more. -ded-<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chihara Minori<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,239 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Chihara Minori<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-06-19T13:12:29+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n CookieKivi wrote:<\/h4>m4mmaybe use a little bit sharper bg? looks weird with this hq sb lol is it? its actually cute for me lol<\/span><\/span>normal<\/a>00:00:857 (3) - blanket error really?<\/span>00:05:913 (1,2,3) - this looks so overmapped..00:16:026 (5) - blanket error00:36:082 (5) - sllllllllllight ^00:57:823 (5) - ^01:43:328 (4) - avoid overlap01:45:688 (4) - make this straight after 3<\/div><\/div>i coudn't find more. -ded-<\/blockquote>no reply = fixedThanks for your mods<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 6x2e18