{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Shmiklak<\/a>\n\n \n Elite Storyboarder\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/a>\n\n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,287 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2015<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Shmiklak<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-07-04T08:19:23+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi from Wajiklak's queue General<\/h2> Metadata in iTunes<\/a> (track 9)<\/li> Add more tags for example: piano - because this song is mostly pianoLet My Music Play - name of song's albumIs he russian guy? I'm not sure but seeems he is russian. We can see it in his facebook: http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPHJy\/b633379774.jpg<\/a>http:\/\/www.facebook.com\/fidel.wicked\/<\/a>So if he is russian I'm suggesting to add \"russian\" to tags too.<\/li><\/ol><\/div>Easy<\/h2> First and maybe most visible problem is your blankets. All they should be polished. If you don't know how to make perfect blankets check this: p\/4516808<\/a><\/li><\/ol><\/div>ah I'll be back later. Need to go right now. Will finish mod later<\/del> I'm back and we had IRC mod:<\/span>SPOILER<\/a>18:57 Shmiklak: hey :D18:57 Shmiklak: glad to see you :D18:59 Phyloukz: hey :D18:59 Shmiklak: how are you? :D19:00 Phyloukz: doin great atm, how about you? (:19:00 Shmiklak: same xD19:01 Shmiklak: do you have time to IRC?19:03 Phyloukz: uhm... i wanted to play a bit but yeah sure i do have time :D19:04 Shmiklak: Okay I'll write you everything what do I think19:04 Shmiklak: Don't forget to reply me for discus about some stuffs19:04 Phyloukz: (never done IRC mod before)19:04 Shmiklak: lol19:04 Shmiklak: it's simple19:04 Shmiklak: and much better tbh19:04 Phyloukz: D:19:05 Phyloukz: well yeah you can ask instantly19:06 Shmiklak: First of what did I find right now is this slider 00:31:477 (4) - I'm suggesting rotate it to 15and then move at 120 276 to make perfect DS to 00:34:290 (1) - Btw flow will look and play much better imo19:06 Shmiklak: oh yes19:06 Shmiklak: it's easy diff19:06 *Shmiklak is editing [https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/b\/934598 Fidel Wicked - Memories (Do You ?) [Easy]]19:07 Phyloukz: 15 in which way?19:07 Shmiklak: clockwise19:07 Shmiklak: will look like in this pic http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPWmk\/e9f73881bf.jpg19:07 Phyloukz: yea, looks nice!19:07 Shmiklak: okay19:07 Shmiklak: xD19:07 Shmiklak: let's find sth more xD19:08 Phyloukz: x)19:08 Shmiklak: Do you have any ranked map or gd?19:08 Phyloukz: nope :c19:08 Phyloukz: first serious map19:08 Shmiklak: so I can gratzz you. This mapset is perfect for being your first rank :D19:09 Phyloukz: thankyou ^-^19:09 Shmiklak: tbh it's much better then my mine first rank xD19:09 *Shmiklak is listening to [https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/b\/904307 The Living Tombstone - It's Been So Long]19:09 Shmiklak: xD19:10 Phyloukz: well i cant judge that ._.19:11 Shmiklak: lol19:11 Shmiklak: well then19:11 Shmiklak: let's go next19:11 Shmiklak: btw don't forget to add all tags which I have wrote in first part of my mod19:11 Phyloukz: btw, i tried to polish all blankets since you said that in your incompleted mod19:11 Shmiklak: yeah I see19:12 Phyloukz: yea, i'll do that later on19:12 Shmiklak: fix all blankets in another diffs pls too19:12 Phyloukz: i checked normal too, hard and insane i have to look at19:12 Shmiklak: okay19:13 Shmiklak: glad to hear :D19:13 Phyloukz: normal is kinda the weakness of the mapset cuz of the DS thingy19:14 Shmiklak: btw maybe change sempleset to normal here? 00:32:415 - 19:15 Shmiklak: for fit song much better19:16 Phyloukz: sounds better19:16 Shmiklak: well then19:16 Shmiklak: next19:16 Shmiklak: fix this HS in all diffs19:17 Phyloukz: done19:20 Shmiklak: Maybe make hitsounds volume a bit more here? 01:19:290 - 19:21 Shmiklak: Here music becomes stronget19:21 Shmiklak: so I guess hitsounds need become stronger too19:21 Shmiklak: they are very hard to hear right now19:22 Phyloukz: that good idea19:22 Phyloukz: that's19:22 Shmiklak: owo19:22 Phyloukz: what % do you recommend?19:23 Shmiklak: hm 19:23 Shmiklak: 50% maybe?19:23 Shmiklak: if you will make it 50% remove this green line too 01:34:290 - 19:23 Phyloukz: yea thats what i thought too19:24 Phyloukz: since those 2 sections are nearly the same19:24 Phyloukz: so same volume19:24 Shmiklak: Oh19:24 Shmiklak: I didn't see19:24 Shmiklak: you are changing sv in easy19:24 Shmiklak: well19:24 Shmiklak: it's fine19:24 Shmiklak: but...19:25 Phyloukz: honestly i thought 1000 times to remove it19:25 Phyloukz: in all diffs19:25 Shmiklak: you should change DS in parts with 1.20 velocity19:25 Shmiklak: don't remove it19:25 Shmiklak: it's fine19:25 Phyloukz: i did that already did i?19:26 Shmiklak: no19:26 Shmiklak: http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPXkI\/046ee129bc.jpg19:26 Shmiklak: 00:42:727 (2) - 19:26 Shmiklak: as you can see19:26 Shmiklak: it's 0.819:27 Phyloukz: oh i changed it just in normal19:27 Phyloukz: i see19:27 Shmiklak: replace all objects in easy diff19:27 Shmiklak: with right DS19:27 Shmiklak: or UNRANK will wait you19:28 Phyloukz: but maybe just make every part of the map 1.2 velocity?19:28 Phyloukz: so no DS issues19:28 Shmiklak: well19:28 Phyloukz: i think thats less effort and much safer..19:28 Shmiklak: will be simpler make every part of the map 1.0 velocity19:28 Shmiklak: not really19:28 Shmiklak: if you will do it19:28 Phyloukz: hmm19:29 Shmiklak: you will should to fix ds in all old 1.0 parts19:29 Shmiklak: and give me a mib19:29 Shmiklak: min19:29 Shmiklak: I need to restart osu19:30 Shmiklak: Alt+Tab didn't work19:30 Shmiklak: okay19:30 Shmiklak: now it works fine19:30 Shmiklak: and19:30 Shmiklak: let's continue19:30 Shmiklak: What will you do with all this DS issues?19:31 Phyloukz: in general you mean?19:31 Shmiklak: yes19:31 Phyloukz: i think i just make every part 1.2 velocity19:31 Phyloukz: hoenstly19:31 Shmiklak: okay19:31 Phyloukz: do you think velocity change make sense?=19:32 Shmiklak: tbh I don't this 19:32 Phyloukz: i think not, and even if then i must make 1.0 velocity to every slow part19:32 Shmiklak: it's your map19:33 Shmiklak: do what do you think is needing19:33 Shmiklak: I'm just modder19:33 Shmiklak: And I'm just giving you my opinions19:33 Shmiklak: so19:33 Phyloukz: so i'll just make 1.2 velocity on everypoint of the map and i nevery diff19:33 Phyloukz: yea19:33 Phyloukz: but ill do that later19:33 Shmiklak: it's your pick19:34 Shmiklak: choice*19:34 Phyloukz: ill do that that way19:34 Shmiklak: let's go next19:34 Phyloukz: so no DS changing except normal probably19:36 Shmiklak: 01:28:665 (3,4,5) - Here I'm suggesting move it sth like in this pic for make flow much better http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPXR4\/dfad0e9971.jpg19:37 Phyloukz: changed that19:38 Shmiklak: I'm suggesting to remake all same straight flows. They look not sexy. 01:49:290 (1,2,3,4) - 01:53:040 (1,2,3,4) - 01:56:790 (1,2,3,4) - etc19:41 Shmiklak: 02:34:290 (1,2,3) - these blankets still could be better. Fix it please.19:41 Phyloukz: is that solution as a fix okay? http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPY5C\/cd1bc42f79.jpg or is it to weird?19:41 Shmiklak: well it's better19:41 Shmiklak: But I'm suggesting use more roundish flows19:41 Shmiklak: anyway it's just my opinion19:41 Phyloukz: okay19:42 Shmiklak: you can keep this one19:43 Shmiklak: I guess it can be all for easy diff19:43 Shmiklak: let's look to Normal diff19:43 *Shmiklak is editing [https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/b\/933425 Fidel Wicked - Memories (Do You ?) [Normal]]19:44 Shmiklak: 00:39:680 (9) - using 1\/4 in Normal diff is aceptable but still it's not recomend19:44 Shmiklak: same with all 1\/4 stuffs19:45 Phyloukz: hmm19:45 Shmiklak: It can be used only for long repeat sliders19:45 Shmiklak: not kick sliders like here19:45 Shmiklak: or in low BPM songs19:45 Phyloukz: but its low bpm so i thinkj19:45 Phyloukz: +yea19:45 Phyloukz: xD19:45 Shmiklak: Not really slow19:46 Shmiklak: It ussualy uses in devided to 2 BPMs songs19:46 Shmiklak: for example19:46 *Shmiklak is listening to [https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/b\/872597 Party Favor - BAP U (not sorry Remix)]19:46 Shmiklak: here is BPM 174 from one side19:46 Phyloukz: but is it really an issue for ranking?19:46 Shmiklak: but mapper used 8719:46 Shmiklak: well19:46 Phyloukz: i mean it feels okay to me19:47 Shmiklak: it can be ranked with it19:47 Shmiklak: but it's not recomend19:47 Shmiklak: as I said you before19:47 Shmiklak: :)19:47 Phyloukz: okay19:47 Phyloukz: ill keept that in mind19:47 Phyloukz: keep*19:47 Shmiklak: you can keep it if you want19:47 Shmiklak: it's not my map19:47 Shmiklak: it's your map19:47 Phyloukz: :D19:49 Phyloukz: what should i use instead of it? 2 notes maybe?19:49 Phyloukz: or even a slider19:49 Shmiklak: 1\/2 slider could be cool I guess19:50 Phyloukz: would be a bit unique to that simple mapset, so i like that one19:50 Shmiklak: btw wtf with DS on these 1\/4?19:50 Shmiklak: why here is DS is 0.72? 00:07:805 (6) - 19:50 Shmiklak: but your main DS is 1.2019:50 Shmiklak: :\/19:51 Phyloukz: it would be sooooo far away19:51 Phyloukz: with 1.219:51 Phyloukz: which i didnt like at all19:51 Shmiklak: well19:51 Phyloukz: idk many modders said that19:51 Shmiklak: I'm not sure about rankability this19:51 Shmiklak: try to ask qat or bn19:52 Phyloukz: why is everyone hating different ds so much ;_;19:52 Shmiklak: still it can be placed very nice19:52 Shmiklak: because they are unrankable19:52 Shmiklak: read RC agai19:52 Shmiklak: if you don't trust me19:52 Shmiklak: and modders19:52 Shmiklak: :\/19:52 Shmiklak: 232 100 can be fine19:52 Phyloukz: so IS IT unrankable?19:53 Shmiklak: and rotate like here http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPYGU\/c1cc875e2b.jpg19:53 Shmiklak: I guess yes19:53 Phyloukz: fml19:53 Phyloukz: that sucks....19:53 Shmiklak: If you have really important reason for it19:53 Shmiklak: you can keep it19:53 Phyloukz: i mean its consistent all over the map19:53 Shmiklak: but I doubt in it19:53 Phyloukz: but well19:53 Phyloukz: rules are rules :^)19:54 Phyloukz: gonna change that then later on too19:54 Shmiklak: better don't try RC for strength :)19:54 Shmiklak: because it can finish bad19:54 Phyloukz: xD19:54 Shmiklak: like at least DQ19:55 Phyloukz: well yeah... ill just accept that19:55 Phyloukz: although is personally see no reason19:56 Shmiklak: and I want to remind you it's your first map, so I guess BNs will pay attention on this if you wouldn't fix it19:56 Phyloukz: damn.. i guess youre right19:56 Phyloukz: i think its the simplest way for everyone xD19:56 Phyloukz: so ill do it19:56 Shmiklak: lol19:58 Shmiklak: btw19:58 Shmiklak: I have find sth for you19:58 Shmiklak: in osu wiki19:58 Phyloukz: oO19:58 Shmiklak: http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPYY7\/04405c5c92.png19:58 Shmiklak: https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/wiki\/Normal19:58 Shmiklak: here19:59 Shmiklak: tbh didn't know about you can change it if new combo19:59 Shmiklak: I know some moments when it's possible19:59 Shmiklak: but this19:59 Shmiklak: will know lol19:59 Phyloukz: D:19:59 Shmiklak: ;w;20:01 Phyloukz: well still its not a strict rule, just >highly recommended< xD20:01 Phyloukz: but ill change it anways20:01 Shmiklak: yes20:05 Shmiklak: fix this ds too 03:11:555 (1) - 20:05 Shmiklak: and this 03:13:430 (4) - 20:06 Shmiklak: I guess it can be all for normal20:06 Shmiklak: let's check Hard20:06 *Shmiklak is editing [https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/b\/995183 Fidel Wicked - Memories (Do You ?) [Hard]]20:07 Shmiklak: 00:02:414 (1) - well it's fine, but just my opinion. Ussual curve would be much better :v20:07 Shmiklak: ussual curve is http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPZrb\/8d2204b923.jpg20:08 Phyloukz: hmm... many modders said that20:08 Shmiklak: because they are right20:09 Shmiklak: seriously20:09 Phyloukz: ill keep that for now20:09 Phyloukz: i think20:09 Shmiklak: why you didn't listen modders?20:09 Shmiklak: If everyone says something20:09 Phyloukz: wait what?20:09 Shmiklak: you should do it20:09 Phyloukz: did you look at my responses?20:09 Phyloukz: i almost get everything what they saay xD20:10 Shmiklak: if you have any reason to keep let's keep it, if no do it20:10 Shmiklak: but still20:10 Shmiklak: it's your map20:10 Shmiklak: :v20:10 Phyloukz: ichange20:10 Shmiklak: I have important stuff20:10 Shmiklak: these triplets20:10 Shmiklak: 00:04:055 (4,5,1) - 20:11 Shmiklak: in hard you used 1.0 ds for triplers20:11 Shmiklak: but20:11 Shmiklak: in insane20:11 Shmiklak: 0.720:11 Shmiklak: and20:11 Shmiklak: it's easier then in hard20:11 Shmiklak: :v20:11 Shmiklak: it's not right20:11 Shmiklak: yes you can keep it20:11 Shmiklak: no problems20:11 Shmiklak: just pay attention20:12 Phyloukz: thats a point20:12 Phyloukz: i dont think i could20:12 Phyloukz: thats a strong argument20:12 Phyloukz: why ds smth in hard higher than in insane, thats stupid20:12 Phyloukz: ill probably have to change it20:13 Shmiklak: well then20:16 Shmiklak: 00:51:633 (2,3) - this blanket still can be better. Please fix it!20:17 Phyloukz: aye20:18 Shmiklak: 01:04:758 (2,4) - the overlap seems weird. I'm suggesting to move (4) a bit for escape this overlap20:18 Shmiklak: still it's not really important20:19 Shmiklak: 01:09:915 (1,2,3,4) - this knot of blankets could be better too. Fix please20:20 Phyloukz: yeah20:20 Shmiklak: yeah for what?20:21 Phyloukz: overlap removed and blankets fixing...20:21 Shmiklak: okay20:22 Shmiklak: check all blankets again. I could miss some20:22 Phyloukz: ill do20:22 Phyloukz: btw20:22 Phyloukz: do you think normal sampleset is appropriate here? 01:13:430 (3) -20:22 Phyloukz: on these spots20:23 Shmiklak: yes20:23 Shmiklak: and I guess it can be all for Hard20:23 Shmiklak: let's check Insane20:23 *Shmiklak is editing [https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/b\/1002511 Fidel Wicked - Memories (Do You ?) [Insane]]20:23 Shmiklak: 00:04:055 (4,5,1) - did you fix this triplet?20:24 Phyloukz: i make same ds like in hard20:24 Phyloukz: for insane triplets20:24 Shmiklak: oki20:25 Phyloukz: think thats okay20:27 Shmiklak: well overal other in Insane is not bad20:27 Shmiklak: nothing very important20:27 Shmiklak: let's I post this log<\/pre><\/div><\/div>Overal not bad mapset, it's fine to be your his first ranked mapset, but it needs some polishing. Anyway I love the song and againstly as I said before it's not bad. Dear BNs please pay attention on his map. I guess it's fine to get star icon like sometime ago Sonyc has gave me star icon for my FNAF song. Best of luck~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by Shmiklak<\/a> 2016-07-04T15:32:41+00:00<\/time>, edited 2 times in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Sakurauchi Riko<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,633 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2015<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Sakurauchi Riko<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-07-04T09:02:28+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Asserin wrote:<\/h4><\/span>~Hello!<\/h2>Easy<\/h2><\/li><\/ul>00:09:915 (1,2,3,4) - This violent transition is unnecessary. Its Easy so make it better for this diff like => https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/5534808<\/a> changed<\/span><\/li>00:13:665 (1,2,3) - It looks very aesthetically atm. It's not blanket, it's bad ;-; correct it pls what the hell did i make there, added blanket<\/span><\/li><\/li>00:52:571 (5,1,2) - ^ added blanket<\/span><\/li>00:41:321 (5,1) - Correct blanket fixed<\/span><\/li>00:42:727 (2,3,4) - ^ ^<\/span><\/li>01:05:227 (2,3) - ^ ^<\/span><\/li>00:43:665 (3,4,5) - It's mistake becouse players which start playing osu can have problem with this patten. Why? Becouse \"5\" is on road for first click but after \"3\" should be \"4\" and they will feel dissociation. Simply saying \"4\" should be on place which is \"5\". damn really good point (never would think that way), changed obviously - (5) isnt on road of (3) anymore, ds adjusted<\/span><\/li>01:08:977 (2) - Why you fold it ? :v It looks so much better => http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/5534837<\/a> wnated to create variety, well consistency is more important is it? changed<\/span> <\/li><\/ol><\/div>Normal<\/h2><\/li><\/ul>I can't mod it becouse you have problem with AiMod, correct it at first => http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPGAu\/3000e802a9.png<\/a> i used e.g. from 00:08:977 (8) - to 00:09:680 (1) - different DS (which should be consistent all over the map) because there'S more space. If I'd use same Ds everytime it would just be way too far away and it'd look random<\/span> <\/li><\/ol><\/div>Insane<\/h2><\/li><\/ul>00:09:915 (1,2) - Hmm generally it's not mistake but looks weird for me. Why you didn't make mirror effect from \"1\" ? =>https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/5534875 changed that<\/span><\/li>00:24:915 (1,2) - ^ there's symmetry and it doesnt really look weird (furthermore there's a nice pattern coming up which i dont want to destroy or change)<\/span><\/li>Emm i feel confused with distance ;-; You put it random ? I mean 01:04:290 (1,2,3,4) - Its same rhythm all time so why you changed distance ? You should keep same distane for the same rhythm ;-; Pls correct it in this diff and it will be so much better :3 (But i dont mean only this part, i mean whole diff) i didnt map with DS at all (as i mapped that mapset i was very very very<\/strong> newbie in mapping) i have consistent DS on that part of music for now but the rest of the map doesnt feel weird or inappropriate imo, so yeah..<\/span><\/li><\/ol><\/div><\/blockquote>thank you very much for your mod! (:<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Sakurauchi Riko<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,633 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2015<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Sakurauchi Riko<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-07-04T10:35:30+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Shmiklak wrote:<\/h4>Hi from Wajiklak's queue General<\/h2> Metadata in iTunes<\/a> (track 9)<\/li> Add more tags for example: piano - because this song is mostly pianoLet My Music Play - name of song's albumIs he russian guy? I'm not sure but seeems he is russian. We can see it in his facebook: http:\/\/puu.sh\/pPHJy\/b633379774.jpg<\/a>http:\/\/www.facebook.com\/fidel.wicked\/<\/a>So if he is russian I'm suggesting to add \"russian\" to tags too.<\/li><\/ol><\/div>Easy<\/h2> First and maybe most visible problem is your blankets. All they should be polished. If you don't know how to make perfect blankets check this: p\/4516808<\/a><\/li><\/ol><\/div>ah I'll be back later. Need to go right now. Will finish mod later<\/blockquote>I wanted to wait until you posted your fully mod but I already polished all blankets in Easy now! <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Spayyce<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 707 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Spayyce<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-07-05T03:02:49+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hey! Mod from my queue <\/h2> General<\/center><\/div>BPM \/ Offset: Sound perfect<\/li>Folder: Your .png image is quite a large file. I can give you a much smaller filesize of the same image: here.<\/a><\/li>Metadata: Perhaps add: piano, instrumental, house(?) to the tags. Pretty sure he is a russian artist, so russian metadata may be needed.<\/li>AiMod: Looks fine.<\/h2> Easy<\/center><\/div>00:34:290 (1) - I would let this curve down more to better create a flow pattern between notes.00:38:040 (1,2,3) - You could consider making these symmetrical?00:50:227 (2,3) - not a fan of this sudden transition, I would just keep it curved for consistent with the previous slider bunch.01:10:852 (4) - Move this red anchor to (X:208 Y:356) for added consistency with when the sliderball turns.01:17:415 (4) - NC? I hear a small buildup, maybe it would be fitting?01:25:852 (5,1) - Make these the same slider type by copy+paste so they're consistent 01:30:540 (1) - I would say extend this all the way till it is 1\/1 away from the slider.01:43:665 (4,5) - The flow here isn't that good, curving the slider would fix that imo<\/li><\/ul><\/h2> Normal<\/center><\/div>00:47:883 (3,4) - Not a fan of this kind of pattern tbh, the flow gets messed up between both sliders01:01:477 (3) - move the end anchor to the right a touch, I think it will do a big difference 01:12:727 (2) - Since it's larger than most of your current sliders of this type, I think you could get away with curving the first part for a really nice addition to flow and aesthetics.<\/span>Flow<\/a><\/div><\/div>01:17:415 (4) - (Same NC suggestion as in easy)01:27:024 (2,6) - Find a way to stack these perhaps it would look better imo01:41:086 (4,2) - ^ (more inclined to tell you to stack them here tho )01:43:196 (4,1,2,3) - Blanketing distance between these is different, make them consistent please XD01:54:446 (4,1,2,3) - ^ (opposite ways now though)02:06:633 (6,7) - Flow between these are funny, move slider 7 down to rectify a nice flow idea. 02:09:680 (5) - Move further to the left in order to maintain flow as well.02:11:790 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not a fan of this to be honest, it is a strange contrast from what style you were previously mapping to, and I feel it should retain consistency through sliders, >.<02:22:102 (7) - I see what you've done from a stacking point of view, but sometimes stacking is not the best situation in every way, as you can see from stacking this you have not made room for the next note to neatly come off the slider.02:25:383 (5,6) - Perhaps blanket these, would make a better aesthetic look tbh.<\/li><\/ul><\/h2> Hard<\/center><\/div>00:02:414 (1) - Curve distance between this slider is uneven, think of these sliders as two normal curved sliders and use a red anchor in the middle to denote when one ends and one begins.<\/span>Example<\/a><\/div><\/div>(on the left is the new style and the right is your slider type<\/span>00:06:165 (1,3) - Bad aesthetic flow between the slider borders, I would make slider 3 have a curvature the same as slider 1 and line it up so it's a slider blanket.00:31:477 (1) - I'm not a fan of the end curve, it doesn't look too good imo, using red anchors can be helpful in these scenarios:<\/span>Slider<\/a><\/div><\/div>01:25:852 (8) - This is inconsistent with the previous sliders, and although there is a beat (I think the beat is on 1\/3 tho) there is a similar if not the same beat, here: 01:24:094 01:34:758 (2,3) - Bad slider orientation, it doesn't look well structured and has a strange flow about it >.>01:47:415 (1,3) - Maybe make these the same slider type for consistent with the symmetry?01:49:758 (2) - Reverse the curve to the go the other way, I feel it will transition into the 1\/4 nicer.02:04:290 (1) - The curve at the end is way too harsh, it doesn't look nice, I would use the suggestion above abouting using red anchors to slider curves.02:13:665 (3) - imo removing the curve at the end would make for a clean finish on this slider.02:29:602 (3) - ^^ (except it's at the beginning)02:30:540 (1,2,3) - Keep these the same slider type since the music is the same.02:34:758 (2,3) - Slider end isn't blanketed correctly with slider 3.02:38:040 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make a diamond pattern with these, I feel it will look much cleaner and add a bit spice to this part? 02:45:540 (1,2,3) - imo I wouldn't put the jump so soon into this pattern, just keep the ds the same for here.02:47:415 (1,2) - I would also make these the same slider type to add to the consistent flow into the next kiai.02:50:696 (5) - This is a touch too far out of the distance snap (my magic eye noticed this) \/me runs02:53:743 (4) - Move this to (X:184 Y:36) and move 02:53:977 (5) - to (X:332 Y:88)02:58:196 (5,2) - Stack these for better consistency.03:17:883 (2) - Rotate 90 so it has a nicer ending flow.<\/li><\/ul><\/h2> Insane<\/center><\/div><\/li><\/ol>[list:1337]00:02:414 (1) - Curvature suggestions in the hard are to be referred here aswell 00:14:836 (5,1) - I think you could stack this together to make a nicer aesthetic look.00:17:415 (1) - Remove a white anchor from the first curve I think it looks nicer like that as it works well with the second curve on this slider.00:27:258 (2) - Move this further up to make the flow more consistent.00:29:602 (4,5,1) - Blankets? >.>01:05:227 (3,4) - I feel as if these should go the other way to make a more circular motion, I just feel it will be nicer XD01:35:696 (5,1) - Same slider type for consistency?01:35:344 (4) - Make this a double tap because the notes after this slider on the same music time are doubles (example: 01:37:219 and 01:39:094 )01:44:719 (4) - ^01:50:344 (4) - ^01:59:719 (4) - ^02:02:415 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing between these kind of puts people off the fact it's a buildup because the pauses don't fit in well with the music.02:13:665 (3) - I'm not a fan of where the red anchor is in relation to the white anchors, I would just make a downward curve at the first part to be consistent with the slider.02:31:711 (5,1) - Blanket suggestion as at 00:29:83602:38:977 (5,6) - Slider type should be the same to be consistent with the music.02:43:665 (1) - Curve this more so it's a more profound blanket with the previous note 4.03:07:102 (5) - Pull the first white anchor down a little bit more on follow my slider suggestion above.<\/li><\/ul>Best of luck in getting this ranked!<\/strong>EDIT: Forgot to say, your insane is more like a Light Insane, so I would consider changing the diff name.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Sakurauchi Riko<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,633 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2015<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n 5l722u