{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,090 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-02-03T14:51:48+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hello! A mod in return~ Sorry for the huge delay ;n;I have to pop the bubble for some vast reasons on the storyboard and other stuffs, mostly on general. [> General <]- You have five unused storyboard files, pretty sure a good chance of disqualification. So, I guess It's best you delete them. Listed below:<\/span>SBF<\/a>- black.png- lyr10.png- lyr20.png- lyr3.png- sakura2.png<\/em><\/div><\/div><\/li>- Some storyboard files are quite too huge, image file dimensions are more than allowed maximum. Like some of the SB lyrics elements were used with a largely size of 5000x400, I wouldn't allow it to get into the qualified listing with that. And also, maximum image dimension was mentioned in the criteria as well:The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively.<\/strong> This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.<\/blockquote><\/li>- The storyboarding is quite cool tbh. The audio spectrum on the centre-bottom of the set seems great, but it's a little repetitive while repeating the actions over and over again except the left side of it. But since you've worked hard on it, I don't think you should rework on it just for minor reasons ;p Good job with it anyway!<\/li><\/ol>[> Down's Normal <]00:37:529 (4,1) - The spacing here is pretty low, while mainly using 0.7x on this calm part. Recorrecting it would suffice.<\/li>00:40:572 (2) - Optional objective: Maybe a bit of curve on the tail of the slider? It'd improve bit of the flowing structure when it'd head towards the next note directly, which would make it a little comfortable for the beginner players to guide their cursor easily and smoothly. But if the current one is what you want, it'll still be fine as long as it's rankable and in an average aesthetics.<\/li>01:20:572 (3) - Seems pretty minor, but you could at least make this little blanket more accurate for some aesthetical improvement, when giving it a try. Sth like this would do:<\/span>ss<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>01:23:181 (2) - On slider's tail, replace the whistle to clap. It sounds clunky and noisy over the emphasis with the song.<\/li><\/ol>[> Hard <]00:25:355 (2,3) - The jump here is quite a small sudden, nothing hits intense on the song track but downbeats(snares). So maybe equalizing objects with the music regarding the spacing, how about moving slider (2) somewhere near x:360|y:338 or around it? The gap would only be 0.20x, so it wouldn't take too much stress on \"clicking\" up the downbeat.<\/li>00:27:094 (2,3) - I think making this part a ive pattern isn't very well or wise. A matching rhythm for this part is to Ctrl+G these two notes on the timeline, and it'll surely sound better than the current. As if it's applied, you can try another ive pattern like below pic for example. The circle stacks on the other slider for an indication of the music, can make it more interesting tbh:<\/span>ss<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li><\/ol>[> Lunatic <]01:17:094 (1) - Why not replace this onto another grid for a greater spacing? At least around\/nearby x:216|y:65 would give a perfect 1.7x spacing as you usually spaced for the kiai time.<\/li><\/ol><\/div>Overall, the mapset is great. If it were only the storyboard elements were organized correctly, I would've planned to qualify this. Well, ended up being popped for rankability reasons.Anyways, get me back once everything's done!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Left<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,163 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Left<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-02-04T03:13:56+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Sorry for late check...It's was my graduation today. I'll fiix them in train!Thanks~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Down<\/a>\n\n \n Featured Artist\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 643 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Down<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-02-04T04:33:23+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Cerulean Veyron wrote:<\/h4>Hello! A mod in return~ Sorry for the huge delay ;n;[> Down's Normal <]00:37:529 (4,1) - The spacing here is pretty low, while mainly using 0.7x on this calm part. Recorrecting it would suffice.<\/li>00:40:572 (2) - Optional objective: Maybe a bit of curve on the tail of the slider? It'd improve bit of the flowing structure when it'd head towards the next note directly, which would make it a little comfortable for the beginner players to guide their cursor easily and smoothly. But if the current one is what you want, it'll still be fine as long as it's rankable and in an average aesthetics.<\/li>01:20:572 (3) - Seems pretty minor, but you could at least make this little blanket more accurate for some aesthetical improvement, when giving it a try. Sth like this would do:<\/span>ss<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>01:23:181 (2) - On slider's tail, replace the whistle to clap. It sounds clunky and noisy over the emphasis with the song.<\/li><\/ol><\/blockquote>All fixed! <\/strong><\/span>Thanks http:\/\/puu.sh\/mV9ja\/9f198b9508.zip<\/a><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Left<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,163 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Left<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-02-04T14:11:09+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Patch note<\/span>- SB things.* Changed all images to smaller size ( so they don't violate rules.)* equalizer deleted* unused files deleted-Map thingsCerulean Veyron wrote:<\/h4>[> Hard <]00:25:355 (2,3) - The jump here is quite a small sudden, nothing hits intense on the song track but downbeats(snares). So maybe equalizing objects with the music regarding the spacing, how about moving slider (2) somewhere near x:360|y:338 or around it? The gap would only be 0.20x, so it wouldn't take too much stress on \"clicking\" up the downbeat.fix<\/span><\/li>00:27:094 (2,3) - I think making this part a ive pattern isn't very well or wise. A matching rhythm for this part is to Ctrl+G these two notes on the timeline, and it'll surely sound better than the current. As if it's applied, you can try another ive pattern like below pic for example. The circle stacks on the other slider for an indication of the music, can make it more interesting tbh:fix<\/span><\/span>ss<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li><\/ol>[> Lunatic <]01:17:094 (1) - Why not replace this onto another grid for a greater spacing? At least around\/nearby x:216|y:65 would give a perfect 1.7x spacing as you usually spaced for the kiai time.fix<\/span><\/li><\/ol>[\/notice]Overall, the mapset is great. If it were only the storyboard elements were organized correctly, I would've planned to qualify this. Well, ended up being popped for rankability reasons.Anyways, get me back once everything's done!<\/blockquote><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,090 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-02-06T15:16:06+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Recheck, no kudosu<\/u>Hard<\/strong>- HP Drain 5 for a balanced dissemination with the rest of the difficulties. Which would spread alike 3\u207a\u00b2 > 5\u207a\u00b2 > 7.01:15:355 (1) - Add finish on slider's head, it would've done with the Lunatic diff. Just a bit hitsounding consistency.Just a few things, and hopefully ready to be rebubbled. Get me back again once done.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Left<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,163 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Left<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-02-07T00:14:42+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Cerulean Veyron wrote:<\/h4>Recheck, no kudosu<\/u>Hard<\/strong>- HP Drain 5 for a balanced dissemination with the rest of the difficulties. Which would spread alike 3\u207a\u00b2 > 5\u207a\u00b2 > 7.fix<\/span>01:15:355 (1) - Add finish on slider's head, it would've done with the Lunatic diff. Just a bit hitsounding consistency.fix<\/span>Just a few things, and hopefully ready to be rebubbled. Get me back again once done.<\/blockquote>Thanks~<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,090 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n 2016-02-07T02:54:33+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Everything seems alright, including the storyboard. I guess this beatmap is ready for sure. A rebubble, you deserve! <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Left<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,163 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n p6r3k