{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Video<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 232 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Video<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-15T04:24:44+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n ez kd simulator<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n FCL<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,497 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n FCL<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-15T14:06:25+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n M4MTbh this map looks clean, just a few suggestions to do it better[]<\/li><\/ul>I'm sure your map does not require three first kiai times, music is also calm. However you can add kiai fountains if you understand me (If not just ask me in-game)<\/li>00:01:425 (1) - hm, maybe triple, it's fine here?<\/li>00:10:503 (8) - move up a bit for better triangle<\/li>00:39:911 (2,4) - bad overlap, fix it<\/li>00:50:372 (4) - try to make a symmetrical form, like this http:\/\/puu.sh\/lWq7t\/f182dfbc1b.jpg<\/a><\/li>01:06:556 (6) - probably fix this overlap will be okay<\/li>01:32:214 (7) - move on 144 116 for create a good triangle<\/li>01:34:385 (4) - spacing error? distance looks not correct<\/li>01:39:911 (2) - try to stack with end of 01:38:530 (8) - <\/li>01:40:109 (3,4,5) - flow it bad for me, my suggestion http:\/\/puu.sh\/lWqmt\/dbf065324b.jpg<\/a><\/li>02:17:214 (1) - i think you shoud make more spacing here imo<\/li>02:19:977 (9) - not clear now, move on 212 332<\/li>02:58:859 (2,6) - try to stack<\/li>03:05:372 (3) - add red dot at centre of slider, will look nice<\/li>03:20:174 (8,3) - stack<\/li>04:02:223 (6,7) - maybe stack? Now it looks weird, although...<\/li>04:07:899 (6) - again space error?<\/li>04:45:602 (4,7) - meh, fix it, looks bad now<\/li>04:46:818 (8,9,10,11,12) - looks really bad, make a pentagon it fine<\/li><\/ol><\/div>uh, really like this song. Good luck!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Video<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 232 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Video<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-15T21:23:53+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n FCL wrote:<\/h4>M4MTbh this map looks clean, just a few suggestions to do it better[]<\/li><\/ul>I'm sure your map does not require three first kiai times, music is also calm. However you can add kiai fountains if you understand me (If not just ask me in-game)<\/li>00:01:425 (1) - hm, maybe triple, it's fine here? - I wanted the map to start up simple and build up to the first chorus so i made it a single note<\/em><\/span><\/li>00:10:503 (8) - move up a bit for better triangle - okee<\/em><\/span><\/li>00:39:911 (2,4) - bad overlap, fix it - okee<\/em><\/span><\/li>00:50:372 (4) - try to make a symmetrical form, like this http:\/\/puu.sh\/lWq7t\/f182dfbc1b.jpg<\/a> - okee<\/em><\/span><\/li>01:06:556 (6) - probably fix this overlap will be okay - okee<\/em><\/span><\/li>01:32:214 (7) - move on 144 116 for create a good triangle - okee<\/em><\/span><\/li>01:34:385 (4) - spacing error? distance looks not correct - i think its fine<\/em><\/span><\/li>01:39:911 (2) - try to stack with end of 01:38:530 (8) - no thank you<\/em><\/span><\/li>01:40:109 (3,4,5) - flow it bad for me, my suggestion http:\/\/puu.sh\/lWqmt\/dbf065324b.jpg<\/a> - no thank you<\/em><\/span><\/li>02:17:214 (1) - i think you should make more spacing here imo - fixed<\/em><\/span><\/li>02:19:977 (9) - not clear now, move on 212 332 - made more clear and readjusted them in my own way<\/em><\/span><\/li>02:58:859 (2,6) - try to stack - okee<\/em><\/span><\/li>03:05:372 (3) - add red dot at centre of slider, will look nice - didnt add red point but fixed that slider up<\/em><\/span><\/li>03:20:174 (8,3) - stack - okee<\/em><\/span><\/li>04:02:223 (6,7) - maybe stack? Now it looks weird, although... - no thanks<\/em><\/span><\/li>04:07:899 (6) - again space error? - fixed<\/em><\/span><\/li>04:45:602 (4,7) - meh, fix it, looks bad now - fixed<\/em><\/span><\/li>04:46:818 (8,9,10,11,12) - looks really bad, make a pentagon it fine - made more pentagonal<\/em><\/span><\/li><\/ol><\/div>uh, really like this song. Good luck! - Thanks a bunch! <\/blockquote>Thank you for the mods! The map is now a lot more prettier and less bad <\/span><\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,061 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-16T04:28:13+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi again!First of all, please make volume level on the green and red lines here 03:29:994 - equal.[Gone]00:29:451 (5,1) - the way you want players to jump right after a relatively weak beat is strange. Try to avoid the jump here? example<\/a><\/li>02:16:819 (9,1) - spacing in-between those two feels compressed. Probably (1) should be x0.1 farther than that. <\/li>03:53:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the volume at the first circles is still quite hard to hear. ARe you sure you don't want to try drum sampleset or make the soft ones a little louder like starting 35>40>45 and so on...Note: 01:53:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you know what to do if you agree to make this a little more audible <\/li>04:02:325 (7) - no-no, don't make up patterns. Oovermapping you try to use here does not fit with the song. <\/li>04:44:993 (3) - let's flip it the other way, so players won't expect this slider to have two repeats. example<\/a>Note: 01:32:214 (7) - same here.<\/li><\/ol>You did great job!<\/strong>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Poke me once this is adressed, and I'll bubble. <\/strong><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Video<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 232 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Video<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-16T05:15:48+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Bakari wrote:<\/h4>Hi again!First of all, please make volume level on the green and red lines here 03:29:994 - equal. - oops. fixed<\/em><\/span>[Gone]00:29:451 (5,1) - the way you want players to jump right after a relatively weak beat is strange. Try to avoid the jump here? example<\/a> - okee. followed the example<\/em><\/span><\/li>02:16:819 (9,1) - spacing in-between those two feels compressed. Probably (1) should be x0.1 farther than that. - i think i forgot to move it when i was re-mapping. fixed<\/em><\/span> <\/li>03:53:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the volume at the first circles is still quite hard to hear. ARe you sure you don't want to try drum sampleset or make the soft ones a little louder like starting 35>40>45 and so on... - I decided to take the tom sound from Cry Thunder<\/a> for the first two notes<\/span>Note: 01:53:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you know what to do if you agree to make this a little more audible - :3<\/em><\/span><\/li>04:02:325 (7) - no-no, don't make up patterns. Oovermapping you try to use here does not fit with the song. - replaced with a single note and remapped slider<\/em><\/span><\/li>04:44:993 (3) - let's flip it the other way, so players won't expect this slider to have two repeats. example<\/a> - okee<\/em><\/span>Note: 01:32:214 (7) - same here. - same okee<\/em><\/span> <\/li><\/ol>You did great job! - Thank you! <\/span> <\/strong>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Poke me once this is adressed, and I'll bubble. <\/strong><\/blockquote>Thanks again for some finishing touches! I'll poke you asap <\/span><\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Video<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 232 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Video<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-17T23:25:41+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n accidently clicked kd button instead of going to your profile. fuck me<\/del>thanks ByBy13<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by Video<\/a> 2015-12-18T23:42:18+00:00<\/time>, edited 1 time in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n 1m1j3e