{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Ipas<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 806 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Ipas<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-11-27T08:19:41+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Go for it<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yohanes<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,285 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yohanes<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-11-27T08:51:57+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Ipas wrote:<\/h4>Go for it<\/blockquote>definitely<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Electoz<\/a>\n\n \n Nomination Assessment Team\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/a>\n\n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,899 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2015<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Electoz<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-03T00:50:18+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi, from my modding queue~ I'm not good with marathon so my mod quality won't be high as it should be sry.[General]Why did you enable countdown? (Or did you just forgot about it lol)<\/li><\/ol>[Recollection]00:28:299 (4,5) - This blanket is a little bit off(if you look it closely you'll see it, it really just a little bit).<\/li>00:47:480 (1) - I would prefer to ctrl+J this and move back to the same position for a better flow.<\/li>00:47:111 (4,5,6) - A little stream here feels like a straight line and gives a weird feeling, you could move some circles there to make the flow curvy.<\/li>01:12:070 (3,4) - I think if they were spaced a little bit farther it would emphasize the vocal better.<\/li>02:36:414 (1,2,3) - The flow is a little bit weird imo.<\/li>03:28:545 (5) - This slider should be curved like previous sliders to keep the flow smooth.<\/li>03:56:332 (3,4) - Could you make these become more symmetrical somehow?<\/li>04:54:119 (2) - Overlaps the life bar, move it please.<\/li><\/ol>Sry if my mod isn't useful.Good luck!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Battle<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,865 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Battle<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-03T13:48:51+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n m4m from queue:00:08:627 (1,2) - Maybe flip so 1 leads into 200:32:726 (4,5) - Maybe move 5 up more to like flow a bit better with 4 <\/span>example<\/a><\/div><\/div>00:32:726 (4,1) - Stack 00:58:053 (3,1) - Stacked not on purpose or?01:06:906 (6,7,1) - ctrl + g rhythm (once you've removed 7) because you've been following vocals01:20:430 (5,1,2) - 5 isn't really in the middle of both of them01:57:807 (4,1) - I assume this isn't stacked on purpose but pointing it out just in case it's not on purpose03:46:496 (1,2,3) - You should consider getting a silent sliderslide hitsound04:48:463 (2,1) - StackThat creepy whisper at the end lolgl with your map o\/<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yohanes<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,285 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yohanes<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-04T06:57:16+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>Electoz<\/a>Electoz wrote:<\/h4>Hi, from my modding queue~ I'm not good with marathon so my mod quality won't be high as it should be sry.[General]Why did you enable countdown? (Or did you just forgot about it lol) Yes, I forgot fixed<\/span><\/li><\/ol>[Recollection]00:28:299 (4,5) - This blanket is a little bit off(if you look it closely you'll see it, it really just a little bit). k<\/span><\/li>00:47:480 (1) - I would prefer to ctrl+J this and move back to the same position for a better flow. I prefer mine acually<\/span><\/li>00:47:111 (4,5,6) - A little stream here feels like a straight line and gives a weird feeling, you could move some circles there to make the flow curvy. It curved lol. Changed it anyway<\/span><\/li>01:12:070 (3,4) - I think if they were spaced a little bit farther it would emphasize the vocal better. k<\/span><\/li>02:36:414 (1,2,3) - The flow is a little bit weird imo. I don't think so, but I'll keep that in mind<\/span><\/li>03:28:545 (5) - This slider should be curved like previous sliders to keep the flow smooth. Nah, I want them straight <\/span><\/li>03:56:332 (3,4) - Could you make these become more symmetrical somehow? I'll change it<\/span><\/li>04:54:119 (2) - Overlaps the life bar, move it please. ok<\/span><\/li><\/ol>Sry if my mod isn't useful.Good luck! Thanks!<\/span><\/blockquote><\/div><\/div><\/span>Battle<\/a>Battle wrote:<\/h4>m4m from queue:00:08:627 (1,2) - Maybe flip so 1 leads into 2 k<\/span>00:32:726 (4,5) - Maybe move 5 up more to like flow a bit better with 4 k, no big deal<\/span>00:32:726 (4,1) - Stack k<\/span>00:58:053 (3,1) - Stacked not on purpose or? k<\/span>01:06:906 (6,7,1) - ctrl + g rhythm (once you've removed 7) because you've been following vocals No, it's following vocal already besides, i also want to emphasis the beat in 01:07:152 - <\/span>01:20:430 (5,1,2) - 5 isn't really in the middle of both of them lol k<\/span>01:57:807 (4,1) - I assume this isn't stacked on purpose but pointing it out just in case it's not on purpose yea<\/span>03:46:496 (1,2,3) - You should consider getting a silent sliderslide hitsound k<\/span>04:48:463 (2,1) - Stack k<\/span>That creepy whisper at the end lolgl with your map o\/\\o<\/span><\/blockquote><\/div><\/div>Thank you for modding <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kalibe<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,068 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed October 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kalibe<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-06T10:03:56+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hello.<\/u>general:<\/strong>Change Audio Lead-In to 2000 ms just to be safe?[Recollection]00:31:250 (4,5,6,7) - 00:31:250 (4,5,6,7) - These streams sounds weird, because it's sounds like normal 1\/2 pattern. (Blue ticks are inadiuable a bit ) 00:05:676 (3) - Hm how about ctrl j this slider and do that ? : http:\/\/puu.sh\/lLeLK\/0940cbd7ce.jpg<\/a>00:14:283 (1,2) - Sounds like a hitsounds spam and i don't think this clap emphasise music. I remove Claps on sliders and add 2 Whistles on red ticks. It's better imo.00:16:004 (6,1) - Swap NC maybe?00:17:726 (4,1) - ^00:28:299 (4,5) - Fix blanket please.00:32:234 (2,3) - Linear flow is meh... Make this more smooth imo.<\/strong>00:35:676 (5,1) - Swap NC, cause of downbeat.00:37:398 (4,1) - ^00:42:808 (1,3) - ^00:47:111 (4,5,6) - These circles are overmapped for me. I don't hear anything on blue ticks.<\/strong>00:49:201 (1,2) - Hm try this thingy ? Looks more clean imo. : http:\/\/puu.sh\/lLf51\/8cd922d89f.jpg<\/a>00:50:676 (1,3) - Swap NC.00:54:857 (1,2) - ^00:58:791 (1,2) - ^01:07:889 (2,3) - This spacing emphasis is odd to me. Because i hear the stronger beat is on white tick so 2 < 3 tho.01:10:716 (5,7) - Blue ticks are inaudiable.<\/strong>01:34:692 (7) - If you want, you could NC this.02:14:037 (5) - Missing NC.02:18:955 (3) - Straight slider instead of curved?02:29:405 (5,7) - Inaudiable, put maybe Whitstle at least.02:30:512 (2,3) - I think 2 < 3 in spacing emphasis.02:37:644 (1) - Move this to x: 424 y: 152 to have a better transision between stream and slider.02:37:644 (1,2) - Stack these : http:\/\/puu.sh\/lLfow\/c08829f32d.jpg<\/a>03:55:348 (2,4) - Claps don't fit with music tho. Replace it with Whistles.Ok, that's all. This map needs more work, but i wish you luck. Good luck and Merry Christmas. o\/<\/u><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Pho<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,785 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Pho<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-07T19:06:34+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi o\/ m4m thingBold:<\/strong> Fix quickly\/unrankable issuesPurple:<\/span> QuestionableRed:<\/span> Highly recommend[General]Nothing~<\/li><\/ol>[Recollection]00:06:168 - Up to this point slider velocity is pretty high for the intro, please calm it down by ~0.2<\/span><\/li>00:14:283 (1,2) - Silence the sldiertails (with soft-hitnormal).<\/li>NC switches because emphasis is set on wrong beats:<\/strong>00:14:037 (4,1) - 00:16:004 (6,1) - 00:17:726 (4,1) - 00:24:857 (5,3) - 00:27:070 (1,3) - 00:35:676 (5,1) - 00:37:398 (3,1) - 00:42:070 (2,3) - 00:50:676 (1,3) - 00:54:857 (1,2) - 00:58:791 (1,2) - 01:16:988 (3,1) - 01:28:545 (4,1) - 01:32:726 (4,1) - 02:35:676 (3,1) - etc.Try to set NCs on the prominent beats first (that is, in this case, on the strong white ticks). Don't prioritise the vocals too much as they are not determining the measure of the song.<\/li>00:16:250 (1,2,3,4) - Definitely not lol. <\/strong>Please rework this rhythm, there#s no clicking action on the prominent beats. Example:<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>There are beats like 00:45:512 - which you skip very often to follow vocals more specifically, but I highly recommend you think about this again.<\/strong>Leaving these beats out, especially the big white tick ones, makes your rhythm instable. Rei usually sings songs at a certain, but constant pace with little rhythm variations, and so should this map.<\/li>01:24:857 - Certainly should not leave this beat out.<\/li>01:50:430 - Turn the volume down by 10%, this section's pretty loud.<\/li>02:15:512 (7) - Slider + circle please, rhythm goes over pattern. Also 02:16:988 - map this out:<\/span>SPOILER<\/a> 5x6j6d