{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kamikaze<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,898 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kamikaze<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-11-08T18:59:04+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Metadata check before real mod (will edit this post)Artist: onoken<\/strong> - honestly I don't know if it should be onoken or ONOKEN. Album title says ONOKEN and AW website says onoken. Most websites refer to him as onoken so stay with that I guess.Title: children\u2019s domain<\/strong>Source: \u30a2\u30af\u30bb\u30eb\u30fb\u30ef\u30fc\u30eb\u30c9<\/strong>Tags:Accel World Original Soundtrack feat.<\/strong> - Album name (onoken is in artist already)instrumental<\/strong>Sources: http:\/\/www.amazon.co.jp\/Accel-World-Original-Soundtrack-feat-ONOKEN\/dp\/B008BG6YVY<\/a> - I guess this is official site to buy the soundtrack CDhttp:\/\/whv-amusic.com\/aw-music\/<\/a>Symphogear as a diffname would , but if you'd have three difficulties. I had a map DQ'ed before because I had two diffs - one called easy and second Lingering Regrets, so change it to Normal or something to be same.Also BG is horrible quality and I can get some work on it done but that will come when I mod itEDIT#1: Sent BG on skype, here's the link in case you forgot kek https:\/\/www.dropbox.com\/s\/rf8znw6paohhabi\/children's%20domain.png?dl=0<\/a>EDIT#2: We pretty much through most (if not all) problems on Easy and some general things on IRC:<\/span>log<\/a>21:16 -Kamikaze-: ok hi21:16 -Kamikaze-: w21:16 Elementaires: huie21:16 Elementaires: hi21:16 -Kamikaze-: lol dude you don't even realize how bad that typo was21:16 -Kamikaze-: huie reads as huje in polish21:17 -Kamikaze-: and that's dicks21:17 Elementaires: wow21:17 -Kamikaze-: OFF TO A GOOD START FELLAS21:17 Elementaires: :D21:17 Elementaires: huie huiehuie21:17 -Kamikaze-: g a y21:17 Elementaires: okay21:17 -Kamikaze-: ok so first things first21:17 -Kamikaze-: why EZ NM as diffnames21:17 -Kamikaze-: Easy Normal is so much better looking21:18 Elementaires: yes i dont know21:18 -Kamikaze-: (ok)21:18 Elementaires: i dont even know if the gap is okay21:18 Elementaires: easy is very easy21:18 Elementaires: and normal is.. i dont know21:19 Elementaires: some tricky long notes21:19 -Kamikaze-: judging by starrating\/object count it should be okay21:19 -Kamikaze-: I'll check it out on auto tho21:20 Elementaires: the NM is bad; i dont know how to make new patterns to not have repetition21:20 Elementaires: and i tried some hitsounds so it makes ugly21:21 -Kamikaze-: tbh it's hard to not make it repetetive with this song21:21 Elementaires: :(21:21 -Kamikaze-: that's not a bad thing tho21:22 -Kamikaze-: if song is repeating itself 4 times and you repeat the same thing 4 times blame the song21:22 -Kamikaze-: you're not really going for pitch relevancy points are you21:23 Elementaires: i tried21:23 Elementaires: to follow the pictch21:23 -Kamikaze-: hmm21:23 Elementaires: the pitch fuck21:23 Elementaires: well maybe not on EZ21:24 Elementaires: Easy*21:24 -Kamikaze-: okay I'm terrible at pitch so I won't really go into detail with it I guess21:24 -Kamikaze-: ok go to le easy21:24 -Kamikaze-: 00:00:828 (828|3,1428|3) - move those to 5 maybe?21:24 -Kamikaze-: |1-9|21:25 Elementaires: right21:25 -Kamikaze-: 00:02:328 - you could accent this whole fulte section with a note there21:25 -Kamikaze-: \"sample effect\" how I call it21:26 -Kamikaze-: 00:07:128 - same21:26 -Kamikaze-: and to all of those honestly21:26 Elementaires: i can place on 1 and 9 then21:26 -Kamikaze-: yea sure21:27 -Kamikaze-: make it on the other hand than notes around it are tho21:27 -Kamikaze-: ballance and shit21:27 Elementaires: ah21:27 -Kamikaze-: 00:10:128 (10128|6,10428|2,11028|2) - ctrl+h for pitch?21:28 -Kamikaze-: 00:13:728 (13728|5) - you're suddenly accenting that flute which you didn't accent at 00:04:128 - ?21:29 Elementaires: because im dumb21:30 -Kamikaze-: 00:18:528 (18528|4) - same tbh21:30 -Kamikaze-: idk21:31 -Kamikaze-: 00:22:728 - add a note for clap21:31 -Kamikaze-: 00:23:928 - ^21:31 -Kamikaze-: 00:27:528 - ^ tougher pattern but w\/e21:31 -Kamikaze-: you could add at 7 here and maybe move 00:28:128 (28128|8,28428|8) - to 8 even tho they're the same pitch21:32 -Kamikaze-: your choice21:34 -Kamikaze-: same for all claps that you've layered with 1 note21:34 -Kamikaze-: or unless those that have that other thingy21:34 -Kamikaze-: should help with bridging the gap as well21:35 Elementaires: like where21:35 -Kamikaze-: 00:28:728 - 21:36 Elementaires: so i basically add a note on all the empty 1\/221:36 -Kamikaze-: add a note where claps are21:36 -Kamikaze-: not sure if they're constant 1\/221:37 -Kamikaze-: let me know when you apply things I've mentioned21:38 -Kamikaze-: (they kinda apply to whole map)21:38 -Kamikaze-: ((blame the song))21:38 Elementaires: yeah okay ;w;21:40 -Kamikaze-: stop around 01:07:728 - with the sample effect notes for flute21:40 -Kamikaze-: I have a good idea for further gap bridging21:45 Elementaires: im updating21:45 -Kamikaze-: oki21:46 Elementaires: i tried something near 29 secondes to 40 like mini stairs just tell me if it is gud or not21:46 -Kamikaze-: oki will see21:47 Elementaires: updatededed21:48 Elementaires: well i just hope i understood you successfully21:49 -Kamikaze-: http:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/394475721:49 -Kamikaze-: mfw letterboxing21:49 Elementaires: ohfuck21:49 -Kamikaze-: life goes on21:49 Elementaires: what to do21:49 -Kamikaze-: nothin'21:50 -Kamikaze-: 00:13:728 (13728|5) - kinda meant to delete those notes tbh21:51 -Kamikaze-: 00:23:628 (23628|5) - move to 5 for pitch21:52 -Kamikaze-: 00:25:128 - something like this would be better pitch wise http:\/\/puu.sh\/lgOI1\/3044252a62.png21:52 -Kamikaze-: those stairs are okay, tho pitch wise they're kinda lol21:52 -Kamikaze-: idea is good21:53 -Kamikaze-: 00:29:628 (29628|1,29778|3) - this _could_ be moved towards right21:53 Elementaires: yes21:54 -Kamikaze-: actually you could work more on spreading those stairs more and making them even _spacing_21:54 Elementaires: i feel like its a mess LOL21:54 Elementaires: yeah21:54 -Kamikaze-: lmao21:54 -Kamikaze-: 00:37:278 - add a note here tho to be consistent21:55 -Kamikaze-: 01:05:328 - could add a note or two21:56 -Kamikaze-: (second being on next 1\/4)21:56 -Kamikaze-: 01:06:528 - same21:56 -Kamikaze-: 01:07:728 - add a note as well21:57 -Kamikaze-: 01:08:028 (68028|4,68328|1,68628|4,68928|1,69228|4,69528|1,69828|4) - you could\/should spread out at least white tick notes more and move the main anchor away21:57 -Kamikaze-: 01:10:128 (70128|6,70428|6,70728|6,71028|6,71328|6,71628|6) - and then make this a trill, preferably two handed symmetrical one (373737 or something like that)21:59 Elementaires: i dont get it about 01:08:028 (68028|4,68328|1,68628|4,68928|1,69228|4,69528|1,69828|4) -21:59 -Kamikaze-: spread out the pattern22:00 -Kamikaze-: if you want to keep the main beat anchor (01:08:028 (68028|4,68628|4,69228|4,69828|4) - ) at least move it away a bit22:00 Elementaires: 01:07:728 (67728|6) - should i delete this22:01 -Kamikaze-: nah it's fine22:02 Elementaires: https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/394481122:03 -Kamikaze-: yup, that's okay22:03 -Kamikaze-: ok last thing I wanted to mention about Easy diff is that you could layer those flutes from 01:14:328 - onward with short LNs22:04 -Kamikaze-: that is for the whole 'burst'22:04 -Kamikaze-: rest of the map is the same things mentioned22:05 -Kamikaze-: 01:29:628 - o you may map those sound streams fully from here on because it's the end anyway22:05 -Kamikaze-: the 1\/4 I mean22:06 Elementaires: https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/3944825 yellow or white22:07 Elementaires: and im okkay for the 1\/4 streams22:07 -Kamikaze-: yellow22:07 -Kamikaze-: brb 10 mins22:14 -Kamikaze-: okback22:15 -Kamikaze-: did you apply everything to easy?22:15 Elementaires: just submitted22:15 Elementaires: tell me what you think22:15 Elementaires: im scared22:16 -Kamikaze-: 00:20:328 (20328|4,20328|2,20928|8,21528|2,21528|4) - nope, not what I mean22:16 -Kamikaze-: I meant that pitch changes22:16 -Kamikaze-: so you should move the second one22:16 -Kamikaze-: applies to all similar thingies with pitch change22:17 -Kamikaze-: 00:31:728 - not missing22:17 -Kamikaze-: note*22:17 -Kamikaze-: 00:36:528 - same22:18 -Kamikaze-: 00:36:828 (36828|6,36978|3,37128|0,37278|2,37428|6) - it'd be better\/easier\/whatever if it was just a reverse stair22:18 -Kamikaze-: 00:41:328 - mIsSiNg NoTe22:19 -Kamikaze-: 00:46:128 - asme22:19 -Kamikaze-: 00:49:728 - could add here as well22:19 -Kamikaze-: 00:50:928 - add here as well on 7th22:20 -Kamikaze-: hmm maybe I shouldn't be this hard on the metronomes22:20 -Kamikaze-: 01:00:528 - add on 1st fuck it22:20 Elementaires: yeah i dont know22:21 -Kamikaze-: 01:12:828 (72828|7,72978|5,73128|3) - move this further away from the note on 9th just before those22:21 -Kamikaze-: can be tricky to hit22:22 -Kamikaze-: 01:19:128 (79128|1,79128|2) - ok, move the note on the other hand, this combination is kind of a combobreak22:22 -Kamikaze-: 01:20:028 (80028|3,80328|0,80628|3) - same 1\/4 reverse stair idea because you layered it before22:23 -Kamikaze-: idk what to do with those metronomes because sometimes you map it like on 01:17:328 (77328|2) - and sometimes you don't like 01:19:728 - 22:23 -Kamikaze-: damn22:24 Elementaires: yes i dont know either22:24 Elementaires: i should put a note everytime22:24 Elementaires: i think22:24 -Kamikaze-: yeah I was thinking the same thing22:24 -Kamikaze-: to mark the 'start' of the section22:25 -Kamikaze-: man this feels like a bn check22:25 -Kamikaze-: gEtTiNg ReAdY fOr My NeW jOb22:25 -Kamikaze-: sry22:26 Elementaires: lol its cool22:26 Elementaires: im very bad at mapping so i can see my mistakes22:26 -Kamikaze-: you made a wise move of mapping something rather easy and short tho22:27 -Kamikaze-: and it's not nearly as bas as you would think22:27 -Kamikaze-: bad*22:27 -Kamikaze-: though I guess I won't go into Normal diff because I have like 30 mins left before I'll have to go22:28 -Kamikaze-: but oh well22:28 -Kamikaze-: note consistency wise normal is looking a lot better22:28 Elementaires: you can do it another day its okay lol22:28 Elementaires: ah :322:29 -Kamikaze-: it generally needs pattern adjustments and\/or pitch adjustments22:29 -Kamikaze-: 90% being the pitch imho22:29 -Kamikaze-: lol22:29 -Kamikaze-: btw this is a really easy song to hitsound lmao22:29 -Kamikaze-: I'm jelly22:30 -Kamikaze-: trying to hitsound absurd gaff is slowly making me want to dig my eyes out22:30 Elementaires: could be easy but not for noobs like me22:31 -Kamikaze-: hear clap in music - put clap on playfield22:31 -Kamikaze-: rinse and repeat22:31 -Kamikaze-: aaaand you have rankable hitsounds22:32 Elementaires: good22:32 Elementaires: i'll try my best22:32 Elementaires: and thanks ><22:32 -Kamikaze-: np haha22:32 -Kamikaze-: imma edit the post with log now<\/pre><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kruzon<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,023 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kruzon<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-11-16T19:04:07+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n hiii <\/span>nm<\/a>00:03:528 (3528|0) - https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/3973334<\/a>00:05:328 (5328|1) - (some of them are 1\/4, and 1\/6 snap divisor, well you can differentiate https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/3973360<\/a>00:31:578 (31578|4) - delete, beat exist but on different snap00:35:928 (35928|5,36028|3,36128|8,36228|0) - arrange based on pitch, : 6, 8, 4, 200:48:678 (48678|3) - move to 201:31:728 (91728|7,91728|3,92028|1,92028|6,92178|8,92328|5,92328|2,92478|7) - seems pretty random, suggest:starting this time 01:31:728 (91728|1) - https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/ss\/3973307<\/a>01:32:928 (92928|1,92928|5,93028|2,93028|6,93128|7,93128|3,93228|8,93228|4) - press ctrl + h first, then you move them 1 time to the right01:33:528 (93528|8,93528|4) - move them 2 times to the leftstructure wise it's nice, the reason i stop giving suggestion regarding pattern is because i don't think it's gonna help much, nevertheless as i said its mapped nicely, though it'd be nice if you arranged some of the ln specifically on the fitting pitchoh and it could be more neat if you distanced the gap between notes in consistent order, for example, instead of bundling 2 notes in a row on a column of white and purple color, you could assign both 2 notes on the same color. this will make it more easier to predict and read while playingexample,purple + white colored notes placement, 00:23:328 (23328|6,23328|3) - 00:22:128 (22128|0,22128|5) - same color placement,00:22:728 (22728|3,22728|1) - 00:23:928 (23928|0,23928|2) - for here it start quite good 00:24:528 (24528|1,24528|7) - then it goes random around here 00:26:028 (26028|7,26328|3,26328|8,26628|1) - while the usage of col 1 and 9 are more predictable, the usage of mid key aka spacebar key should be lessened imo, ie 00:31:228 (31228|4,31578|4,32178|4) - 00:40:828 (40828|4,41178|4,41778|4) - then again it's part of your pattern, and you know the best whether it's comfortable or not than me so i'll leave it as thatgood luck with your map<\/div><\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Elementaires<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 658 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Elementaires<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-11-30T01:58:37+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n changes done; also added custom hitsounds at the end kiai normal diffneed more mods mostly about notes placements i guess<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n PyaKura<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,084 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n PyaKura<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-17T10:22:52+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n le domene dez anfan ^^<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Xenophilius<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 456 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Xenophilius<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-21T14:15:48+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n From Findus' x Nixo's Modding Queue<\/a><\/strong>Layouts:9k: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|<\/pre><\/center><\/span>Normal<\/a>00:14:028 (14028|5,14028|0,14328|0,14328|5) - Pitch here is not really the same, change some columns. I mean keyboard pitch, not flute, so you jack 2 notes a 2 notes not instead of jacking 4 notes.<\/li>00:28:128 (28128|3,28128|7,28428|5,28428|1,28728|5,28728|1) - For pitch:00:28:128 (28128|3,28128|7,28428|1,28428|5) - jack these00:28:428 (28428|5,28428|1,28728|5,28728|1) - Don't jack these<\/li><\/ol><\/div><\/div>Ok, this is a really bad and short mod. But I can't do anything else. It's 9k, a keymode I don't play\/map so often, and these are really easy diffs. No kudosu if I don't helped.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Elementaires<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 658 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Elementaires<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-21T15:21:35+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Xenophilius wrote:<\/h4>From Findus' x Nixo's Modding Queue<\/a><\/strong>Layouts:9k: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|<\/pre><\/center><\/span>Normal<\/a>00:14:028 (14028|5,14028|0,14328|0,14328|5) - Pitch here is not really the same, change some columns. I mean keyboard pitch, not flute, so you jack 2 notes a 2 notes not instead of jacking 4 notes.<\/li>00:28:128 (28128|3,28128|7,28428|5,28428|1,28728|5,28728|1) - For pitch:00:28:128 (28128|3,28128|7,28428|1,28428|5) - jack these00:28:428 (28428|5,28428|1,28728|5,28728|1) - Don't jack these<\/li><\/ol><\/div><\/div>Ok, this is a really bad and short mod. But I can't do anything else. It's 9k, a keymode I don't play\/map so often, and these are really easy diffs. No kudosu if I don't helped.<\/blockquote>Its great, dont worry!! thank you <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Kurisu Makise<\/a>\n\n \n Beatmap Nominator\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/a>\n\n \n <\/i>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 409 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kurisu Makise<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-25T18:23:49+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi there! You have been visited by Christmas Cat! One random mod achieved Columns 1-9<\/span>Normal<\/a>00:01:728 (1728|7) - 7, 00:02:028 (2028|5) - 4, 00:02:328 (2328|4,2428|3,2528|4,2628|5) - 6-8-7-5, seems more column-balanced and consistent to pitch.00:03:228 (3228|3,3378|6,3828|2) - 1-3-7 for pitch maybe.00:02:628 - Replace one note with LN till 00:02:928 - for some consistency (also, you used that way later - 00:07:428 (7428|5) - )00:06:228 (6228|5) - 2 for hand balance.00:06:828 (6828|2) - 4, 00:07:128 (7128|6,7228|4,7328|2,7428|5,7428|3,7728|7) - ctrl+h, same as above.00:08:928 (8928|7,9028|4,9128|8) - Seems random and hard to read, try 7-9-6, for example (00:08:478 (8478|6) - to 8 if you accept this).00:12:028 (12028|0) - Hard to read, maybe 5?00:17:928 (17928|4,18228|6,18528|1) - Replace with LNs for consistency.00:26:928 (26928|4) - Maybe 7? Seems a bit weird.00:28:728 - Add one note like before (00:23:928 (23928|2,23928|8,23928|0) - )00:31:428 (31428|2,31428|0) - Move 1 column right for column balance.00:37:728 (37728|2,37828|3,37928|4,38028|5) - Stair is unexpected here, cause you used alternation or spaced streams for 1\/6 before. So better change this in a way to make it consistent.00:41:028 (41028|2,41028|0) - Same as above. Also, i suggest you to avoid copy-paste patterns.00:46:728 (46728|3,47028|5,47328|1) - Better replace with LNs.00:48:528 - Better start following long flute sounds from here:00:49:128 (49128|2) - LN till 00:49:428 - , 00:49:728 (49728|6) - LN till 00:50:028 - , 00:49:878 (49878|5,50028|6) - Move somewhere ofc (5-3 maybe).00:50:328 (50328|6) - LN till 00:50:778 - , end it with note.00:59:328 (59328|8) - LN instead, move notes somewhere.01:00:828 - Missed note, 01:01:278 - 01:01:428 - same (last 2 are for second flute).01:03:528 - Don't ignore second flute (3 notes from here).01:04:878 - Add note to 4 for low pitch.<\/div><\/div><\/span>Easy<\/a>00:32:328 (32328|2) - 2 for some column balance.00:39:528 (39528|7) - 9, same.00:39:828 (39828|4) - 2, same.00:41:628 (41628|3,41778|1) - 6-3 maybe? Seems uncomfortable.00:44:328 (44328|2,44628|5) - 2-7? Something is wrong with column balance again.01:11:928 - Add to 9 and 01:12:228 (72228|0) - delete. That's how you can express this accent.01:15:828 (75828|6) - 8, 01:16:728 (76728|7) - 9, 01:17:928 (77928|8) - 8. 3-noted stream with 2 columns difference in spacing seems like... like anything but pattern, i guess. Also, you used 1 column difference in spacing or constant spacing before, so you'd better change this at least for consistency.01:20:028 (80028|3,80328|0,80478|2,80628|3) - Try 1-6-4-2 for some hand balance and comfort. If accept, then 01:20:928 (80928|5,81228|7,81528|7) - 1 column right, 01:21:528 (81528|1) - 1 or 3, 01:22:128 (82128|8) - 8.01:24:828 (84828|4,84978|5,85128|6,86028|7) - Try to move 1 column right. Dunno why, i like it more that way.01:29:628 (89628|3,89778|2,89928|0,90078|2,90228|3) - Make it more hand-balanced.01:32:028 (92028|7,92178|2,92478|5) - Maybe 3-5-4? More consistent to pitch and more comfortable to read.<\/div><\/div>Good luck and merry xmas! <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Elementaires<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 658 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Elementaires<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-12-25T23:20:29+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Kivicat wrote:<\/h4>Hi there! You have been visited by Christmas Cat! One random mod achieved Columns 1-9<\/span>Normal<\/a>00:01:728 (1728|7) - 7, 00:02:028 (2028|5) - 4, 00:02:328 (2328|4,2428|3,2528|4,2628|5) - 6-8-7-5, seems more column-balanced and consistent to pitch.00:03:228 (3228|3,3378|6,3828|2) - 1-3-7 for pitch maybe.00:02:628 - Replace one note with LN till 00:02:928 - for some consistency (also, you used that way later - 00:07:428 (7428|5) - )00:06:228 (6228|5) - 2 for hand balance.00:06:828 (6828|2) - 4, 00:07:128 (7128|6,7228|4,7328|2,7428|5,7428|3,7728|7) - ctrl+h, same as above.00:08:928 (8928|7,9028|4,9128|8) - Seems random and hard to read, try 7-9-6, for example (00:08:478 (8478|6) - to 8 if you accept this).00:12:028 (12028|0) - Hard to read, maybe 5?00:17:928 (17928|4,18228|6,18528|1) - Replace with LNs for consistency.00:26:928 (26928|4) - Maybe 7? Seems a bit weird.00:28:728 - Add one note like before (00:23:928 (23928|2,23928|8,23928|0) - )00:31:428 (31428|2,31428|0) - Move 1 column right for column balance.00:37:728 (37728|2,37828|3,37928|4,38028|5) - Stair is unexpected here, cause you used alternation or spaced streams for 1\/6 before. So better change this in a way to make it consistent.00:41:028 (41028|2,41028|0) - Same as above. Also, i suggest you to avoid copy-paste patterns.00:46:728 (46728|3,47028|5,47328|1) - Better replace with LNs.00:48:528 - Better start following long flute sounds from here:00:49:128 (49128|2) - LN till 00:49:428 - , 00:49:728 (49728|6) - LN till 00:50:028 - , 00:49:878 (49878|5,50028|6) - Move somewhere ofc (5-3 maybe).00:50:328 (50328|6) - LN till 00:50:778 - , end it with note.00:59:328 (59328|8) - LN instead, move notes somewhere.01:00:828 - Missed note, 01:01:278 - 01:01:428 - same (last 2 are for second flute).01:03:528 - Don't ignore second flute (3 notes from here).01:04:878 - Add note to 4 for low pitch.<\/div><\/div><\/span>Easy<\/a>00:32:328 (32328|2) - 2 for some column balance.00:39:528 (39528|7) - 9, same.00:39:828 (39828|4) - 2, same.00:41:628 (41628|3,41778|1) - 6-3 maybe? Seems uncomfortable.00:44:328 (44328|2,44628|5) - 2-7? Something is wrong with column balance again.01:11:928 - Add to 9 and 01:12:228 (72228|0) - delete. That's how you can express this accent.01:15:828 (75828|6) - 8, 01:16:728 (76728|7) - 9, 01:17:928 (77928|8) - 8. 3-noted stream with 2 columns difference in spacing seems like... like anything but pattern, i guess. Also, you used 1 column difference in spacing or constant spacing before, so you'd better change this at least for consistency.01:20:028 (80028|3,80328|0,80478|2,80628|3) - Try 1-6-4-2 for some hand balance and comfort. If accept, then 01:20:928 (80928|5,81228|7,81528|7) - 1 column right, 01:21:528 (81528|1) - 1 or 3, 01:22:128 (82128|8) - 8.01:24:828 (84828|4,84978|5,85128|6,86028|7) - Try to move 1 column right. Dunno why, i like it more that way.01:29:628 (89628|3,89778|2,89928|0,90078|2,90228|3) - Make it more hand-balanced.01:32:028 (92028|7,92178|2,92478|5) - Maybe 3-5-4? More consistent to pitch and more comfortable to read.<\/div><\/div>Good luck and merry xmas! <\/blockquote>Thanks you so much!!Applied almost<\/span> everything ! <3<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n BilliumMoto<\/a>\n\n \n osu!mixer II\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n 3j2n5d