{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Asonate<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 507 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Asonate<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-11T17:37:08+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>IRC<\/a>2015-08-11 18:48 Asonate: so please fix that spaced stream for now2015-08-11 18:48 Asonate: as in the flow too it2015-08-11 18:49 Asonate: because edgy flow = rip2015-08-11 18:49 Asonate: (with spaced streams)2015-08-11 18:49 Asonate: while you do that ill scan the parts before2015-08-11 18:50 Slick: yeah2015-08-11 18:50 Asonate: 00:04:724 (5) - absolute sightread killer2015-08-11 18:52 Asonate: 01:04:640 (2) - just my personal disliking against 1\/2 repeatsliders, but highly unreadable, not that well synced with the music, and (maybe) better solved with a ring slider2015-08-11 18:52 Asonate: 2015-08-11 18:52 Slick: ring slider=?2015-08-11 18:52 Slick: what's that2015-08-11 18:53 Asonate: same as a slider blanket2015-08-11 18:53 Asonate: you did it quite often2015-08-11 18:53 Asonate: 01:12:561 (1) - here for example2015-08-11 18:53 Slick: i don't know what to do with that reverse arrow2015-08-11 18:53 Slick: repeat slider*2015-08-11 18:53 Asonate: ill tell you my idea in a sec2015-08-11 18:54 Asonate: 01:23:684 (1) - just warning you, dont mind it for now2015-08-11 18:54 Asonate: that blanket is way smaller than the others you have2015-08-11 18:54 Asonate: might be good, might cause trouble with QAT2015-08-11 18:54 Slick: blanket of 5?2015-08-11 18:54 Asonate: Leave it for now2015-08-11 18:54 Asonate: jup2015-08-11 18:54 Slick: :s2015-08-11 18:54 Slick: that can cause trouble with qat seriously?2015-08-11 18:55 Asonate: inconsistent blanket spacing2015-08-11 18:55 Slick: what the hell2015-08-11 18:55 Asonate: rarely happens, but if youre lucky with who checks your map2015-08-11 18:55 Asonate: ...2015-08-11 18:55 Asonate: ( keep it for now, shouldnt be a problem)2015-08-11 18:55 Asonate: 01:22:505 (3) - this slider as an idea to the repeat before2015-08-11 18:56 Slick: make it a repeat slideR?2015-08-11 18:56 Asonate: no2015-08-11 18:56 Asonate: a slider like that, i would have had in mind as a good solution, but do it your way2015-08-11 18:57 Slick: what would be better?2015-08-11 18:57 Asonate: heck, you can keep the repeat, i just pointed it out because it gave me trouble reading it2015-08-11 18:57 Asonate: you are the mapper, choose yourself2015-08-11 18:58 Asonate: 02:27:055 (1) - i think you said these are to the voice2015-08-11 18:58 Asonate: can that be ?2015-08-11 18:58 Slick: don't think so2015-08-11 18:59 Asonate: if yes, keep them, but say you mapped to the drums, because the voice isnt 1\/22015-08-11 18:59 Slick: okay2015-08-11 19:00 Asonate: 02:50:988 (1) - nice job on that :32015-08-11 19:00 Slick: 2015-08-11 19:00 Slick: fuck spinners xD2015-08-11 19:01 Asonate: 03:22:336 (3) - ouch2015-08-11 19:01 Asonate: flow killed again2015-08-11 19:01 Slick: difficult to pattern these big ass sliders2015-08-11 19:01 Slick: without shit overlapping etc2015-08-11 19:01 Slick: i'll try and improve that section2015-08-11 19:01 Asonate: you could make a looping 2015-08-11 19:01 Asonate: Like overlap with itself2015-08-11 19:02 Asonate: might turn out nicely2015-08-11 19:03 Asonate: 04:02:954 (3) - could complain about these 2, BUT it flows well, if you let go of the slider early2015-08-11 19:03 Asonate: might play out well with your high SV2015-08-11 19:03 Slick: do the sliders look fast to you?2015-08-11 19:03 Asonate: 04:07:673 (5) - NC on this2015-08-11 19:04 Asonate: i saw your SV and there isnt a single slider tick on them2015-08-11 19:04 Asonate: so, fast enough2015-08-11 19:04 Asonate: and yes, they are quite fast2015-08-11 19:05 Asonate: 04:21:999 (1) - i know what thats supposed to be, but you\/midge should make all these NC2015-08-11 19:05 Asonate: Unreadable af otherwise2015-08-11 19:05 Slick: might be read as a triplet idd2015-08-11 19:05 Asonate: jup2015-08-11 19:06 Asonate: dem .osu editing 2015-08-11 19:06 Slick: 2015-08-11 19:07 Asonate: SV 0.2 :32015-08-11 19:07 Slick: ah xD2015-08-11 19:07 Slick: yeah 0,50 is still so fast2015-08-11 19:07 Asonate: you should write \".osu editing for SV values\" in the thread2015-08-11 19:07 Slick: with my 2,77 sv2015-08-11 19:07 Slick: yeah i read something like that<\/div><\/div>Good Luck \\o\/<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 66 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-11T18:36:48+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>arphimigon<\/a>Arphimigon wrote:<\/h4>Here we go again.[Grimoire]00:04:471 (4,5,6) - Only spaced 1\/4 out of the whole start section (and most the map) so either don't add or add a couple more for consistency00:06:325 (6) - Pls rotate about 10 degrees flows better imo fixed<\/span>00:09:359 (1,4) - Bad blanket yo fixed<\/span>00:08:347 (3,4,5,6) - End slider is too curved for this pattern, reduce the curve a little fixed<\/span>00:10:454 (8) - Please remove this note, this triple plays better as two hittable notes fixed<\/span>00:19:977 (1,2) - This really plays bad, the snap needed to get to the curve doesnt compliment the curve itself, start the curve further down please fixed<\/span>01:39:527 (3,4) - Dont make 4 touchy fixed<\/span>02:27:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nerf to like 0.75 DS or smth, it's a bit spaced for a sudden stream03:16:943 (3) - This sounds better as a note imo04:24:696 (1) - 177|162 for OP blankets!04:29:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I really do see this being a DQ for unneccessary diffspike<\/strong> cant you try changing 04:30:089 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - into something how 5eania had done it 03:03:797 (7,8,9) - ?Why haven't you ranked this already baka<\/blockquote><\/div><\/div>Thanks for all the help with the map Arphimigon!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by Slick<\/a> 2015-08-11T19:08:33+00:00<\/time>, edited 1 time in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 66 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-11T19:07:12+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Loughje wrote:<\/h4>PM request~<\/span>Grimoire<\/a>00:03:628 (6,3) - Blanket these and see how you like it. 00:05:651 (3,5) - Could make this into a perfect blanket, just a little off. fixed<\/span>00:11:887 (1,1) - I know you're trying to match the violin but I think ending the slider where the hitsound is might be a better option, up to you.00:19:640 (5,1) - Small blanket issue. fixed<\/span>00:19:977 (1,2) - ^ fixed<\/span>00:26:381 (4) - This seems a bit close to 00:25:875 (3) maybe move it back a bit for a cleaner look. fixed<\/span>00:26:887 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are pretty quiet , think about turning up the volume for these a little bit. fixed<\/span>00:36:156 (1,2) - 00:36:156 (1,2) - These are hitting which doesn't look too good in here, maybe blanket instead? fixed<\/span>00:40:707 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - More very quiet notes.01:09:696 (6,3) - Pretty extreme jumps, maybe take them down just a bit.02:05:482 (2) - Why not blanket this with 02:05:145 (1) 02:11:718 (6) - Really close notes again, think of moving. fixed<\/span>03:05:735 (1,2) - ^03:35:145 (3) - The tail of this is odd being right next to 03:35:482 (1) 03:36:662 (1) - Id curve this up to 03:37:505 (2) For a better flow. fixed<\/span> 03:48:123 (3) - I think this slider looks odd behind 03:47:617 (1) take a look and see if you know what I mean.04:00:763 (4,1) - Move 1 back for a cleaner blanket.04:33:460 - Timing point here and set it to BPM: 89<\/div><\/div>Not a huge mod, really nice map! Hope this helps and good luck on rankings! <\/blockquote>Thank you, Loughje!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Lasse<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,648 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Lasse<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-12T18:54:02+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n little check from #memehelp02:11:887 (1) - move the last point a little bit to the right, would look better imo03:02:448 (4,1) - blanket looks minimally off03:05:145 (4,2) - stack end of 4 on 2?03:53:347 (2) - move a little bit up\/right so the completed slider lead more to it#04:06:999 (3) - dangerously close to being offscreen...04:08:853 (4,1) - blanket the end of 4 with the upper part of 1?04:09:527 (2) - move to around 228\/48?04:12:224 (2) - blanket or stack on sliderend?04:47:617 (1,2) - blanket in each other04:51:662 (2) - make this a mirrored version of 1 ?Honestly, the map seems really well polished and all those mods on it made it really hard to find stuff.So I've been extremely picky with those But since it's looks nice I'll leave a star <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 66 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-12T19:59:21+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Lasse wrote:<\/h4>little check from #memehelp02:11:887 (1) - move the last point a little bit to the right, would look better imo fixed<\/span>03:02:448 (4,1) - blanket looks minimally off03:05:145 (4,2) - stack end of 4 on 2?03:53:347 (2) - move a little bit up\/right so the completed slider lead more to it# fixed<\/span>04:06:999 (3) - dangerously close to being offscreen... fixed<\/span>04:08:853 (4,1) - blanket the end of 4 with the upper part of 1? might do<\/span>04:09:527 (2) - move to around 228\/48? fixed<\/span>04:12:224 (2) - blanket or stack on sliderend?04:47:617 (1,2) - blanket in each other fixed<\/span>04:51:662 (2) - make this a mirrored version of 1 ? Honestly, the map seems really well polished and all those mods on it made it really hard to find stuff.So I've been extremely picky with those But since it's looks nice I'll leave a star <\/blockquote>Thank you, Lasse!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Kibbleru<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 5,846 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kibbleru<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-16T04:27:30+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n welp00:10:201 (6,7,1) - this motion is not very pleasant to play because you cant snap to 00:10:370 (7) - , i recommend more of a zig zag motion00:14:920 (2,4) - maybe u can blanket thisuhg.. im not sure. this is too different to really mod.but honestly on a general scale, i can't tell the difference between why you use and not use extended sliders anymore. it just seems random, and no real consistency.. which is not good obviously.you say you used extended sliders because you want to emphasize vocals. but somebody can easily say \"why not use it here as well\" and so and so.. see the problem?also you also need to fix the spacing to make it more clear where you are using 1\/4 or 1\/2 as well. cuz imo some could be misread pretty easilywell i don't think this actually helps you at all, but that is my opinion on this.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n The Veldt<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 114 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n The Veldt<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-16T04:49:12+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n forbiddenplayer's Marathon Modding Queue<\/a><\/strong><\/span><\/center><\/div>[General]<\/center>>Too high SV, but well that's how you mapped it.>You overuse complex sliders, use it in case of emphasis.>There are many sections with inappropriate SV.>I'll mod about unnecessary bezier curves. It just looks awful when misused.<\/div>[Grimoire]<\/center>00:11:887 (1) - Why use a bezier when you can create a better one than that?00:16:774 (6) - Add more spacing here. It is inconsistent.00:17:617 (2) - Unnecessary bezier.00:19:977 (1) - I know you are following the vocals here but end the slider a tick earlier (where the clap is heard) because it's awkward to hear the slider end.00:27:729 (1) - Change bezier.00:31:269 (2) - ^00:38:010 (3) - Inconsistent with the previous slider. Make it a three point curve then just make it a little bigger so it can end on the blue tick.00:41:550 (1) - Bezier looks awful here. I won't mind beziers when it looks fine.00:43:572 (2) - ^01:47:617 (1) - Improve curve.01:53:010 (1) and 01:53:516 (3) - ^01:55:707 (1) - This slider looks too complex even without emphasis. Try lessening the red points.02:16:269 (3,4,5,6) - Make it a curved stream for aesthetics and as a blanket for 02:16:100 (2).02:22:673 (1) - Too fast and high SV starting from here until 02:28:066 (5).02:34:471 (2) - Improve S-shape.03:54:022 (5) - I suggest a slow curved slider.04:14:583 (1) - Bad overlap.04:41:550 (1) - Bad bezier.04:59:331 (1) - I suggest you end this slider at 05:01:774 because the sound stops there.<\/div><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n - Josro -<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 24 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n - Josro -<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-16T22:11:37+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Short mod c:<\/span>SPOILER<\/a>00:59:415 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern should be a bit smaller01:19:302 (1,2) - Flow feels off here, I would suggest rotating #2 counterclockwise a bit and adjusting the following jumps to make up for it02:21:156 (3,1) - Slider curve doesn't flow well right after coming from those jumps02:22:673 (1) - The jumps following this part are extremely large for the difficulty of the rest of the map02:27:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest starting the curve more horizontal and maybe curving it a little more03:50:988 (3,4,5,6,1) - - This slider doesn't flow well with the jumps, rotating the slider counterclockwise and moving it down helps a lot03:59:752 (1,2,3) - Flow feels off here04:21:999 (1,2,1) - This does not play well, too many triplets with the same or greater spacing for it to be readable<\/div><\/div>Good luck on ranking, map is fun.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 66 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n 5t4q2d