{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Frey<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,205 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Frey<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-07T21:15:16+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n ahh, ppism<\/span><\/span>Storyboard<\/h2><\/center><\/li><\/ul>5eania.png and mexican.png have unnecessary transparency, which could disobey the rules, so here is the cut version: http:\/\/puu.sh\/jt5aa\/ac95878b6c.rar<\/a><\/strong><\/span> The location of 5eania.png may be changed, so do to check and adjust it.<\/li>and I think your bg pictures for sb are too large (like e_sub0301\u3001s_yuuc001, each pic is about 1mb), can you compress them?<\/li><\/ol><\/div><\/h2>Grimoire<\/center><\/li><\/ul>Custom combo color would be better. well, default is good though<\/li>00:32:111 (1,2) - stack those slider ends?<\/li>03:33:123 (1) - two inherit points at the same time!<\/strong><\/span> delete one please<\/li><\/ol><\/div>well, I can't play this map, so I can't give you suggestions about flow or something. I think you need more tests by pro players. Good luck guys.<\/span><\/strong> <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n Sky Trias\n <\/span>\n \n \n \n \n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Sky Trias<\/span>\n\n \n 2015-08-07T23:53:17+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi Slick! o\/As your request for posting mod in thread , sorry late ..no kds.[General]04:11:887 - Kiai Time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. (check AIMod)<\/li><\/ol>[Storyboard]Codeless SB Elementse_yuu1402.png<\/li><\/ol>Unused Image Filesev\/5eania.png<\/li>ev\/_________10.png<\/li>ev\/_________16.png<\/li>ev\/e_sub0301.png<\/li>ev\/e_ter0101.png<\/li>ev\/e_yuu0801.png<\/li>ev\/flash.png<\/li>ev\/mexican.png<\/li>ev\/s_yuuc001.png<\/li>ev\/sunlight flare.png<\/li>ev\/white.png<\/li><\/ol>[Grimoire]00:10:538 (9,1) - swap NC .. NC start on 00:10:538 (9)<\/li>00:14:246 (1) - remove NC here for consistency , add NC on 00:14:583 (5) - and remove NC on 00:14:920 (1)<\/li>00:14:246 (2) - add clap here<\/li>00:17:617 (2) - 5th point move to 208|312 for better flow<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:19:302 (3) - 236|183 (stack with 00:20:988 (3) - )<\/li>00:26:381 (4) - better make same placement like 00:25:370 (1,2) - move this not to 260|200<\/li>00:26:718 (1) - 336|80 , straight with 00:26:887 (2) - <\/li>00:27:561 (8) - Ctrl+H then rotate 75 degree for better flow<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:30:257 (4,5,1) - this placement too close , better move this. Here my recommend 00:30:257 (4) - 396|316 and 00:30:763 (1) - 308|336 (7th point move to 264|160)<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:32:111 (1,2) - stack tail.<\/li>00:36:156 (1,2) - as you can see here , you give small spacing . But on 00:35:819 (4,1) - you give big spacing , better you make another one same spacing like this. If you keep that , move 00:36:493 (2) - 256|148 same like 00:38:010 (3,4)<\/li>00:39:359 (1) - remove NC here , NC start on 00:40:707 (2)<\/li>00:49:302 (2) - 288|324 , same spacing on 00:47:448 (2,3)<\/li>00:59:752 (3,4) - that's was a big spacing , I can't even tap this. decrease the spacing please .. or you can move 00:59:752 (3) - to 352|319 <\/li>01:01:437 (7,8,9) - 196|208 stack with 01:00:426 (1) - also move 01:01:269 (6) - 104|368 . If you don't mind , make 01:00:426 (1,2) - same spacing like 01:01:100 (5,6) - I point before ..<\/li>01:04:134 (5) - 7th point move to 212|168 nazi blanket<\/li>01:05:651 (5) - 296|200?<\/li>01:06:156 (2) - better stack on slider tail 01:05:819 (1) - because the spacing too close.<\/li>01:19:808 (2) - 296|168?<\/li>01:28:572 (1) - remove NC<\/li>01:29:078 (1) - 168|328 blanket with 01:28:572 (1)<\/li>02:02:111 (6,1) - stack<\/li>02:16:943 (2) - 36|52 and 02:19:640 (4) - 460|112 . Same spacing like 02:19:808 (1,2) - <\/li>02:24:527 (2,3,4,5,6) - really death spacing , you need decrease the spacing <\/li>02:27:055 (1,2,3,4) - ^<\/li>02:35:819 (2) - better stack on slider tail 02:34:808 (1)<\/li>04:24:696 (1,1) - hmm..<\/li><\/ol><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 66 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-08T13:16:57+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Frey wrote:<\/h4>ahh, ppism<\/span><\/span>Storyboard<\/h2><\/center><\/li><\/ul>5eania.png and mexican.png have unnecessary transparency, which could disobey the rules, so here is the cut version: http:\/\/puu.sh\/jt5aa\/ac95878b6c.rar<\/a><\/strong><\/span> The location of 5eania.png may be changed, so do to check and adjust it. fixed<\/span><\/li>and I think your bg pictures for sb are too large (like e_sub0301\u3001s_yuuc001, each pic is about 1mb), can you compress them?<\/li><\/ol><\/div><\/h2>Grimoire<\/center><\/li><\/ul>Custom combo color would be better. well, default is good though<\/li>00:32:111 (1,2) - stack those slider ends? fixed<\/span><\/li>03:33:123 (1) - two inherit points at the same time!<\/strong><\/span> delete one please fixed<\/span><\/li><\/ol><\/div> well, I can't play this map, so I can't give you suggestions about flow or something. I think you need more tests by pro players. Good luck guys.<\/span><\/strong> <\/blockquote>Thank you, Frey!<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Akitoshi<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,687 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Akitoshi<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-09T06:18:08+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n I'm not good at looking expert rated maps but here we go~<\/span>00:11:044 (2) - try make like This.<\/a><\/li>00:19:640 (5) - look carefully and maybe here's nazi blanket with 00:19:471 (4) - <\/li>00:20:482 (2) - perfect blanket if you do the Slider structured clean<\/a><\/li>01:29:078 (1) - if you supposed to do blanket, it's not perfect.<\/li>01:32:111 (2) - not balanced space between 01:31:774 (1,3) -<\/li>02:42:898 (1) - good blanket. So please create the slider clean like this<\/a><\/li>04:01:606 (2) - ^<\/li>04:11:550 (2) - Like this? (nvm about my bad blanket lmao)<\/a><\/li>04:24:022 (1,2,1) - seems awkward with unbalanced triples even has NC<\/li><\/ol>I see nothing with brutal maps ;w;<\/span>no kds if it is useless<\/span><\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 66 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Slick<\/a>\n\n \n 2015-08-09T15:01:10+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Sky Trias wrote:<\/h4>Hi Slick! o\/As your request for posting mod in thread , sorry late ..no kds.[General]04:11:887 - Kiai Time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. (check AIMod)<\/li><\/ol>[Storyboard]Codeless SB Elementse_yuu1402.png<\/li><\/ol>Unused Image Filesev\/5eania.png<\/li>ev\/_________10.png<\/li>ev\/_________16.png<\/li>ev\/e_sub0301.png<\/li>ev\/e_ter0101.png<\/li>ev\/e_yuu0801.png<\/li>ev\/flash.png<\/li>ev\/mexican.png<\/li>ev\/s_yuuc001.png<\/li>ev\/sunlight flare.png<\/li>ev\/white.png<\/li><\/ol>[Grimoire]00:10:538 (9,1) - swap NC .. NC start on 00:10:538 (9) fixed<\/span><\/li>00:14:246 (1) - remove NC here for consistency , add NC on 00:14:583 (5) - and remove NC on 00:14:920 (1) https:\/\/osu-ppy-sh.tvgratuite.org\/s\/330216<\/a><\/li>00:14:246 (2) - add clap here but there is no clap in the music<\/span><\/li>00:17:617 (2) - 5th point move to 208|312 for better flow fixed<\/span><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:19:302 (3) - 236|183 (stack with 00:20:988 (3) - ) fixed<\/span><\/li>00:26:381 (4) - better make same placement like 00:25:370 (1,2) - move this not to 260|200 i don't understand, sorry<\/span><\/li>00:26:718 (1) - 336|80 , straight with 00:26:887 (2) - fixed<\/span><\/li>00:27:561 (8) - Ctrl+H then rotate 75 degree for better flow will see about this<\/span><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:30:257 (4,5,1) - this placement too close , better move this. Here my recommend 00:30:257 (4) - 396|316 and 00:30:763 (1) - 308|336 (7th point move to 264|160) fixed<\/span><\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:32:111 (1,2) - stack tail. fixed<\/span><\/li>00:36:156 (1,2) - as you can see here , you give small spacing . But on 00:35:819 (4,1) - you give big spacing , better you make another one same spacing like this. If you keep that , move 00:36:493 (2) - 256|148 same like 00:38:010 (3,4) fixed<\/span><\/li>00:39:359 (1) - remove NC here , NC start on 00:40:707 (2) idk<\/span><\/li>00:49:302 (2) - 288|324 , same spacing on 00:47:448 (2,3) idk<\/span><\/li>00:59:752 (3,4) - that's was a big spacing , I can't even tap this. decrease the spacing please .. or you can move 00:59:752 (3) - to 352|319 ed for now<\/span><\/li>01:01:437 (7,8,9) - 196|208 stack with 01:00:426 (1) - also move 01:01:269 (6) - 104|368 . If you don't mind , make 01:00:426 (1,2) - same spacing like 01:01:100 (5,6) - I point before .. <\/li>01:04:134 (5) - 7th point move to 212|168 nazi blanket fixed<\/span><\/li>01:05:651 (5) - 296|200? ed<\/span><\/li>01:06:156 (2) - better stack on slider tail 01:05:819 (1) - because the spacing too close. ed<\/span><\/li>01:19:808 (2) - 296|168? ed<\/span><\/li>01:28:572 (1) - remove NC thought NC gave a hint slider had big SV change<\/span><\/li> 3p2z70