{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n P A N<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,357 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n P A N<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-11-13T10:55:39+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n feel so lonely here, where is everyone?[Hard]00:05:116 (1) - better delete this note, hard to catch and the beat is not that strong.<\/li>00:13:788 (7) - won't hurt much if move one grid down, somehow it is obviously soft-error spacing.<\/li>00:22:695 (9,1) - Better swap NC.<\/li>00:31:601 (4) - this is hardest diff so I think you can spread this into two circles to fit with vocal more.<\/li>00:34:765 (4) - use 1\/2 slider instead (end on blue tick) and that will be fit with vocal.<\/li>01:12:382 (5) - blanket please.<\/li><\/ol>[Normal]00:08:163 (1) - no need to NC here, the thing it did is just make newbie player confuse. (you know that newbie still play normal diff and some are skip easy to play normal first)<\/li>00:10:976 (1,2) - swap NC.<\/li><\/ol>[Easy]00:54:101 (1,2) - swap NC and so on (NC just at big white tick) like you did on 01:00:195 (1,2).<\/li>01:12:851 (1) - perfect stack.<\/li>01:20:820 - add something would be great, it's too empty. you can add one slider that start on 01:20:820 and end on 01:22:226<\/li><\/ol>you really did nice job here, not so hard to make this rank. already good, try your best and good luck.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yuthuil<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 476 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed April 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yuthuil<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-11-13T17:29:01+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n P A N wrote:<\/h4>feel so lonely here, where is everyone?[Hard]00:05:116 (1) - better delete this note, hard to catch and the beat is not that strong. Done !<\/strong><\/li>00:13:788 (7) - won't hurt much if move one grid down, somehow it is obviously soft-error spacing. Done !<\/strong><\/li>00:22:695 (9,1) - Better swap NC. Done !<\/strong><\/li>00:31:601 (4) - this is hardest diff so I think you can spread this into two circles to fit with vocal more. I'm not sure about that since the vocal is so weird here, too faint for circle perhaps !<\/strong><\/li>00:34:765 (4) - use 1\/2 slider instead (end on blue tick) and that will be fit with vocal. Done !<\/strong><\/li>01:12:382 (5) - blanket please. Done !<\/strong><\/li><\/ol>[Normal]00:08:163 (1) - no need to NC here, the thing it did is just make newbie player confuse. (you know that newbie still play normal diff and some are skip easy to play normal first) Done !<\/strong><\/li>00:10:976 (1,2) - swap NC. Still so new to NCing Done !<\/strong><\/li><\/ol>[Easy]00:54:101 (1,2) - swap NC and so on (NC just at big white tick) like you did on 01:00:195 (1,2). Done !<\/strong><\/li>01:12:851 (1) - perfect stack. Done !<\/strong><\/li>01:20:820 - add something would be great, it's too empty. you can add one slider that start on 01:20:820 and end on 01:22:226 Done !<\/strong><\/li><\/ol>you really did nice job here, not so hard to make this rank. already good, try your best and good luck. THANK YOU SO MUCH !!!<\/strong><\/blockquote><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n FlobuFlobs<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 617 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n FlobuFlobs<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-11-17T21:04:23+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Just quick look, no KDYou should add Audioleadin of 2000, it starts too fastAnd you should check AImod, the previewtime is off in other diffs<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Rakuen<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,654 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed March 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Rakuen<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-11-18T14:33:33+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n ( =`\uff65\u03c9\uff65\u00b4) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM\/M4M)Default = Normal modsOpt. = Optional \/ Minor \/ NaziBlue<\/span> = Strongly recommendedRed<\/span> = Unrankable issue[General]:3Exorcist~There could be an Insane imo, c'mon it's a TV size [Lead In]Maybe can put a bit audio lead in, like 1000 ~ 2000 cuz the song starts quickly[Preview Point]Prefer to place at 00:37:460 - for including the vocal led to chorusAnd place make it same for all diffs[KIAI Time]Try not to abuse the use of KIAI even tho you might want more flash effects, might be the cause unrankable issues.imo 1 flash at 00:52:695 - for the whole KIAI is enough[Hitsound Volume]There's no need 100% volume for all the heavy clash like 00:00:195 (1) - , maximum 80% could work well[Easy]00:05:116 - Unused timing point<\/li>00:10:038 (4) - Minor blanket:<\/span>Image<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:37:460 - Unused timing point<\/li>00:37:695 (1) - Remove the slider clap and make the clap on the head \/ tail. Applies for other notes in KIAI<\/li>00:43:320 (4,1) - Minor blanket:<\/span>Image<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:45:663 (2) - ^<\/li><\/ol>[Normal]00:05:116 - Unused timing point<\/li>00:12:382 - Feels like not needed for hitsounds here<\/li>00:13:788 - ^<\/li>00:17:070 - ^<\/li>00:17:538 - ^ They're silent part, with only bass<\/li>00:36:991 - Prefer a note here and 00:37:460 - for the constant vocal<\/li>00:37:460 - Unused timing point<\/li>00:37:695 (1) - Remove the slider clap and make the clap on the head \/ tail. Applies for other notes in KIAI<\/li>00:42:851 (3) - Try to stack it perfectly with tail of 00:40:976 (1) - , or not to stack too close with it<\/li>01:05:820 (1) - As mentioned, for the slider clap, the claps don't sound at all when playing<\/li>01:22:226 (2) - Remove Clap, sounds extra<\/li><\/ol>[Hard]00:05:116 - Unused timing point<\/li>00:07:695 (1) - Sounds different volume with other heavy hits<\/li>00:56:445 (3,4,5) - Could be a better triangle better like this (rotate 120* each):<\/span>Image<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>01:20:820 (7) - NC for consistency<\/li>01:22:226 (8) - Remove clap<\/li><\/ol>The mapset is nicely mapped, just need a little more improvements on hitsounds~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yuthuil<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 476 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed April 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Yuthuil<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-11-18T17:09:12+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Rakuen wrote:<\/h4>( =`\uff65\u03c9\uff65\u00b4) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM\/M4M)Default = Normal modsOpt. = Optional \/ Minor \/ NaziBlue<\/span> = Strongly recommendedRed<\/span> = Unrankable issue[General]:3Exorcist~There could be an Insane imo, c'mon it's a TV size Hmm...I'm not too sure about this, since the low BPM kinda suggests is shouldn't have one, because if I do make one, then it'll probably be really overmapped !<\/strong>[Lead In]Maybe can put a bit audio lead in, like 1000 ~ 2000 cuz the song starts quickly Done !<\/strong>[Preview Point]Prefer to place at 00:37:460 - for including the vocal led to chorus Done !<\/strong>And place make it same for all diffs[KIAI Time]Try not to abuse the use of KIAI even tho you might want more flash effects, might be the cause unrankable issues.imo 1 flash at 00:52:695 - for the whole KIAI is enough I guess you're right, there's no need to blind the players <\/strong>[Hitsound Volume]There's no need 100% volume for all the heavy clash like 00:00:195 (1) - , maximum 80% could work well Done !<\/strong>[Easy]00:05:116 - Unused timing point Removed.<\/strong><\/li>00:10:038 (4) - Minor blanket: Done !<\/strong><\/span>Image<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:37:460 - Unused timing point Removed.<\/strong><\/li>00:37:695 (1) - Remove the slider clap and make the clap on the head \/ tail. Applies for other notes in KIAI My apologies, but I don't really understand this, since as far as I can see the clap is on the head and tail !<\/strong><\/li>00:43:320 (4,1) - Minor blanket: Fixed.<\/strong><\/span>Image<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:45:663 (2) - ^ ^<\/strong><\/li><\/ol>[Normal]00:05:116 - Unused timing point Removed !<\/strong><\/li>00:12:382 - Feels like not needed for hitsounds here Mistake lol removed<\/strong><\/li>00:13:788 - ^ ^<\/strong><\/li>00:17:070 - ^ ^<\/strong><\/li>00:17:538 - ^ They're silent part, with only bass Removed.<\/strong><\/li>00:36:991 - Prefer a note here and 00:37:460 - for the constant vocal I think the vocals here are too soft, however, I will keep this in mind.<\/strong><\/li>00:37:460 - Unused timing point Removed.<\/strong><\/li>00:37:695 (1) - Remove the slider clap and make the clap on the head \/ tail. Applies for other notes in KIAI My apologies, but I don't really understand this, since as far as I can see the clap is on the head and tail !<\/strong><\/li>00:42:851 (3) - Try to stack it perfectly with tail of 00:40:976 (1) - , or not to stack too close with it Stacked !<\/strong><\/li>01:05:820 (1) - As mentioned, for the slider clap, the claps don't sound at all when playing Added, must've forgotten them.<\/strong><\/li>01:22:226 (2) - Remove Clap, sounds extra Done !<\/strong><\/li><\/ol>[Hard]00:05:116 - Unused timing point Removed.<\/strong><\/li>00:07:695 (1) - Sounds different volume with other heavy hits Does it? Changed the volume then.<\/strong><\/li>00:56:445 (3,4,5) - Could be a better triangle better like this (rotate 120* each): Done !<\/strong><\/span>Image<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>01:20:820 (7) - NC for consistency Done !<\/strong><\/li>01:22:226 (8) - Remove clap Done!<\/strong><\/li><\/ol>The mapset is nicely mapped, just need a little more improvements on hitsounds~ Thank You ! Still so new... <\/strong><\/blockquote>FlobuFlobs wrote:<\/h4>Just quick look, no KDYou should add Audioleadin of 2000, it starts too fastAnd you should check AImod, the previewtime is off in other diffs<\/blockquote>Thank you very much for the quick check, was highly appreciated, and ofc I have now changed the lead in ~ !<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Zhu Yuan<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,439 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed July 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Zhu Yuan<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-11-22T09:42:03+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n M4M, if I'm not mistaken. 6x1d37