{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Edogawa Conan<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 54 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed April 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Edogawa Conan<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-06-02T11:10:46+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n 1<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by Edogawa Conan<\/a> 2015-04-24T13:27:21+00:00<\/time>, edited 1 time in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Ulysses<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,911 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Ulysses<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-06-03T06:05:27+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n We should respect elderly<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n onotoleonide\n <\/span>\n \n \n \n \n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n onotoleonide<\/span>\n\n \n 2014-06-03T19:34:28+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n good map, gl on rank<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n Last edited by onotoleonide<\/span> 2014-06-13T04:58:15+00:00<\/time>, edited 1 time in total.\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Winek<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 888 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Winek<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-06-05T23:27:32+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Will mod tomorrow, star for now <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Winek<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 888 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2013<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Winek<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-06-09T01:53:39+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hello, mod as requested ~ inb4 sarcasm<\/span>Sorry for double post, i can't load draft on already posted post. wat<\/span>General<\/h2>Highly suggesting you to remove \"ultra\" from tags, i mean who actually search with this tags? Your choice anyawy ~<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>I really think you should give that an epilepsy warning. Parts such as 04:03:022 - 04:13:689 are really sudden.<\/li><\/ol><\/div>Legend<\/h2>00:08:224 (4) - What about placing the last construction point to 112;264 for a bette transition with 00:09:824 (5) because the way it currently look is kinda \"random\" between those 2 notes.00:10:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - In all honesty I think you used those New Combo's to recover health after the muches empty spaces but when playing it with Auto having only 300's, which is easy ot accomplish with an easy part such as this, the health bar is still pretty high. I think you could make only 2 new combo's here ; One being at 00:10:224 (1) and the other at 00:11:824 (1) .00:33:424 (6,7) - I don't really like the shape of the 6 ; Just my oinion, but maybe make a direct copy paste of (7) to (6)?00:12:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These trhee make a pretty nice consecutive ; But 00:11:824 (1,2) - is excluded, since he's not poinitng where he should be. Maybe you could try doing like this:<\/span>hey<\/a><\/div><\/div>00:18:524 - A note here could sounds well ; Also it would be more constant with 00:16:824 (2,3,4),00:24:824 (2,3,4) or 00:26:424 (2,3,4) ? Up to you.00:31:824 (3,4) - A bit hard to explain but oyu could actually use (3) as a 1\/1 to follow the vocal and transform (4) in a circle instead. It's just me but it sounds much better.00:58:224 (1,2,3,4) - Dunno for you but I think the placement is a bit meh. What about moving (3) to 482|261, since it would looks nicer, and also it would be slighty more constant with 00:56:624 (1,2,3,4) well hard to explain but for exemple if we reapproach the both slider's tail they would slighty overlap, a bit like <\/span>this<\/a><\/div><\/div>Same would happen if you apply this suggestion, and if you do, be sure to move hte (4).01:01:624 (2,3,4) - Why a triplet here? It would sounds much better as it is like 01:00:124 (2,3) .01:05:524 - Why is the beat ignored? :< Like in every other similar part, we could hear a soft-sample sound, which isn't the case here, breaking apart constanthingy :c01:22:224 (1,2,3) - These notes are completely inauditible. You should consider raising the volume a bit so that we can hear them. The other parts are fine tho.01:35:424 (2,3) - Honestly I think it sound bad, it could be improved! Try this:<\/span>jenny pls<\/a><\/div><\/div>01:49:924 - I can clearly hear why you did a triplet in those parts: 01:49:224 (7,8,9) and others ; But why none here? I can here the sounds, if that's what both listened to. Same goes for 01:52:524.02:11:824 (1,2) - <\/span>Don't know if possible ; look at the slider ball.<\/a><\/div><\/div>I mean, i can't seem to this.02:14:224 (6,7) - I like (7)'s shape, what about copy-pasting it onto (6) which i find meh? Just my opinion.02:19:424 (5) - But now you're ignoring an important beat onto a slider end. You could half the slider and add a clickable action onto that.02:25:224 (6,7,8,9,10) - Again, is this even possible or it's cookiezi? 02:25:524 (8,9,10) looks doable but the other parts 02:25:224 (6,7,8) looks very hard to play.02:26:274 (1) - Just giving a compliment about that shape, it's nice. 02:34:757 until breaks - I really think that soft sample doesn't fit . Hard to say here, but maybe drum sample?I skipped a part of the map as it was just full of streams, nothing really much to say about it.05:17:689 (1) - If i could just try applying you a part of my mapping style ~<\/span>ah i suck at modding<\/a><\/div><\/div>05:22:189 (7) - Honestly ; I don,t understand this slider ; Why not 3 simple notes? I mean the slider really sounds bad because of it starting\/ending on red tick + is not holding any vocals unlike 05:20:856 (3) .05:47:022 (1,2,3) - It's really hard to know when to hit the notes seriously, just in comparison to 05:46:022 (2,3,4) , also you doesn't really have any clue that it kinda slow down. Think about increasing a bit distance between them notes.05:57:689 (1) - Ok every mod need a shitty idea, what about curving down this one just a bit to make an half-assed blanket with 05:58:189 (2) ?05:58:189 (2,3) - Again, distance very<\/strong> hard to see.06:03:285 (1) - goddamit Jenny<\/del> you should icnrease a bit S.V here, just a bit, since much player, to know where there is SV changes, try seeing Sliderticks, but here it's kinda invisisble for a while.06:37:747 (2) - Maybe try moving the last structure point to 75|160 for a better transition with (3), the next note.All the rest is fine.<\/div>Well, good luck on your map, plz stop making me feel like a sitmodder pls.<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n onotoleonide\n <\/span>\n \n \n \n \n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n onotoleonide<\/span>\n\n \n 2014-06-13T05:00:56+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Winek wrote:<\/h4>Highly suggesting you to remove \"ultra\" from tags, i mean who actually search with this tags? Your choice anyawy ~<\/blockquote>This song comes from album named \"Ultra Beatdown\"new mp3 :^)<\/span><\/a><\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n CrazyrabbitKGE<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 89 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2014<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n CrazyrabbitKGE<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-06-13T20:04:40+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n 00:00:624 (1) - kinda awkward place to start a beatmap? just saying; doesn't matter. it should definitely be on the right! waaagh!<\/del>00:28:624 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - the spacing might have to be consistent; it doesn't look very straightforward.01:09:424 (1,2,3) - there is no reason for them to be on the same spot. Not a big problem, though.01:10:624 (5,1) - that's way too down, and consider separating them as well.01:36:224 (4,1) - same as 01:09:42402:15:624 (5) - that one is also way too down.02:45:590 (2,3,4) - I would make these a slider.02:47:923 (8) - I can't hear the hitsound?03:00:823 (5,1) - same as 01:09:42403:32:623 (1,2,3,4) - their positioning looks kinda random. try making them neat.03:41:923 (7,8,1) - doesn't really look like the right place for a jump..03:45:823 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same as 03:32:62304:55:022 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - way too far? (it's 8 times farther away than it is supposed to be. dayum.)06:03:285 (1) - I don't think this is a very good idea. what about just giving the player a break instead?07:02:747 (1) - way too down?07:05:947 (1) - ^07:27:747 (5) - too far away? not a good place for a jump.That's all from me. that's a really hardcore beatmap by the way.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n Akiyama Mizuki<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,710 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed March 2009<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Akiyama Mizuki<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-06-21T07:40:20+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n I hope I can make taiko oni diff. Final test ends in like 3 weeks, so yeah.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Jenny<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,200 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed November 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Jenny<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-07-03T19:58:41+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Zzzz..<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Zare<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,512 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed March 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Zare<\/a>\n\n \n 2014-08-20T16:19:10+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Why would I even... Blahbla, this is all my opinion, blahbla, Legend<\/span><\/h2><\/center>00:10:224 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Two things about this:a) the NCs. The song doesn't really feature such a distinct 2-beat-goruping that would encourage having an NC on every second beat here. It really just feels like dividing the 2 measures would be enoughb) 00:12:424 (2) - weird shit happening here, because on this red tick the guitar pitch gets raised, it doesn't happen on the downbeat as you would expect it, so actually I'd that to be accentuated in the map in some way. (higher spacing, sharper angle, w\/e)<\/li>00:16:624 (1,2,3,4) - Since the map in general is mainly following vocals and guitars, on this first strong sound that's kind of introducing the map's main rhythms, I'd go for a slider on the vocals instead of a circle + triple on the drums, it just seems more fitting to go with the main layers here and then start with the more complex stuff at like 00:24:624 - when the drums get heavier and more noticeable<\/li>00:23:624 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - tbh I dont get this whatsoever, like, the strong BUM BUM drums start 00:23:824 - here but you just kept the same guitar-based stuff, and then you go for 1\/4 sliders? I'd want to have the strong drums that start on 00:23:824 - much more emphasized, if needed i'd even go as far as saying to map the previous guitar patterns using 1\/4 sliders, then transition into circles when the drums kick in, they're just that strong (why did you do sliders on them anyway, practically ignoring every second beat)<\/li>00:27:824 (1) - idk this just seems real weak and lowly scaled, considering how the vocalist like, jumps 3 octaves up.. This doesn't have any kind of patterning going on, either, no sharp, snappy angles, no higher spacing, it's mapped exactly like the rest (tbh i feel like a lot of the map could have some better spacing-oriented emphasis but welp)<\/li>00:32:124 - idk, add circle? vocals are kind of on this tick here, or feel that way<\/li>00:35:024 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - this could just be improved visually, and maybe stick to the sliders on the drumclaps? would feel a bit more epic imo<\/li>00:35:824 - slider for guitar emphasis?<\/li>00:39:024 (1,2,3) - personal preferation right here: don't (auto)stack below a slidertail please. If you have to do a stack, at least do it manually so it a) doesnt fuck your spacing and b) won't kill any kind of modplays (i know you dont care about modplays because blabla map is mapped for nomod bleble but if it doesn't harm your map you might as well do it, no?)<\/li>00:39:024 (1) - another point where I'd like too see higher spacing or something<\/li>00:40:824 (2) - like, you have higher spacing here and it's not significantly stronger than previous one<\/li>00:42:424 (6,7) - you coooouuuuld map these as circles to prevent the slidertail-stream transition at 00:43:024 -<\/li>00:43:824 (1) - tbh this feels like 2 circles would fit better to the vocals that are prominent on both white and red ticks here <\/li>00:56:624 (1,2,3,4) - hngggghhh<\/li>01:00:124 (2,3) - I believe I already pointed this out at some point (dont even ) but, despite being somewhat of a funny feature, why is this a 3\/4 double while 01:01:624 (2,3,4) - is a 1\/2 triple, same for 01:09:724 (2,3) - ofc<\/li>01:31:024 (5) - feels weird because it's like delayed after the vocals by 1\/2, why not just put the slider on 01:30:824 - <\/li>01:32:624 (5,6) - W H Y ? ! ? !<\/u><\/strong><\/span>Like, I understand that you're following the guitar mainly and that is generally okay with other rhythms in this section but these vocals just entirely conflict with that and it wouldn't hurt the guitar rhythms that aren't even present here if you followed these lyrics properly - you even did it 01:40:424 (3) - here ;w;<\/li>01:44:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - since I believe I know how you map this kind of confuses me because I don't see what you tried to do here.. It's just 1\/2 notes in a visually not appealing snake-curve-line-thing without any special stressing on certain beats, even tho the music clearly suggests some guitar strings that clearly stand out <\/li>01:49:024 (6,10) - any reason not to with sliders on these?<\/li>01:55:224 (6,1) - is ths overlap intentional? did you use compleax algorithms to calculate the cursor movement from 01:55:424 (7,1) - which forces (1) to end uo here, overlapping with 6? if not, change this?<\/li>02:11:824 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - hnggghhh<\/li>02:14:224 (6,7) - this sliderpair seems a little forced to me, the second slider should be circles because youknow equal intensitiy on both beats + both feature dominant vocal line<\/li>02:19:424 (5) - Uhm.... what<\/u><\/span><\/strong> 62v38