{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Tshemmp<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,405 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Tshemmp<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-02-27T14:44:30+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Fuck yeah WoDotA! Some small suggestions:Offset: 395<\/li>Remove \"We Are Electric\" from the source, only stuff like movies belong in there.<\/li>Maybe add \"WoDotA\" to the tags.<\/li>I am thinking of some better diff names like [3rd], [2nd] and [1st], you know? Or maybe [First Blood], [Mega Kill] and [Rampage].<\/li>Maybe a more WoDotA Top 10 related background? Idk.<\/li>I think your patterns could use some more variety. For example in the Hard diff 01:07:362 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - is all he same, this can become boring very easily. D:<\/li>Also you shouldn't put new combos so often like 00:39:670 (1,1,1,1,1) - it just makes no sense imo.<\/li><\/ol>Seems pretty nice for you first map I have to say.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n iMirai_old<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 56 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n iMirai_old<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-02-27T14:50:53+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Tshemmp wrote:<\/h4>Fuck yeah WoDotA! Some small suggestions:Offset: 395<\/li>Remove \"We Are Electric\" from the source, only stuff like movies belong in there.<\/li>Maybe add \"WoDotA\" to the tags.<\/li>I am thinking of some better diff names like [3rd], [2nd] and [1st], you know? Or maybe [First Blood], [Mega Kill] and [Rampage].<\/li>Maybe a more WoDotA Top 10 related background? Idk.<\/li>I think your patterns could use some more variety. For example in the Hard diff 01:07:362 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - is all he same, this can become boring very easily. D:<\/li>Also you shouldn't put new combos so often like 00:39:670 (1,1,1,1,1) - it just makes no sense imo.<\/li><\/ol> Seems pretty nice for you first map I have to say.<\/blockquote>Thanks a lot<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 8,061 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n riffy<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-02-28T12:25:20+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n hello [General]Background mustn't be bigger than 1024x768. Cut this one or find a new one. (Note: it's recommended to use 4:3 BGs)<\/strong><\/li>Source is DotA<\/strong>, and remove tags. They doesn't make any sense here. <\/li>Enable Letterbox during Breaks (Song setup > storyboarding) it's more common for mapset with breaks. <\/li>use slider tick Rate 2 please, it will fit with music better.<\/li>DO NOT COPY>>PASTE objects from one diff to another.01:47:471 - example (rampage and holy shit diffs have the same pattern here)<\/strong><\/li>Use distance snap. Except antijump\/jump patterns. [Rampage] 01:45:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is IMPOSSIBLE to play with Hidden. Rhythm is TOTALLY broken here and it feels weird.<\/strong><\/li>Your sliders are the way too fast, imo. Distance between circles is too slow, and sliders are too fast.<\/li>Try to READ osu!wiki it will help you A LOT.<\/strong>Easy<\/a>\/Normal<\/a>\/Hard<\/a>\/Insane<\/a><\/li>mp3 end is kinda weird. did you cut it yourself? <\/li><\/ol>It doesn't make any sense to give a full mod to this mapset, atm. But I still may leave some constructive suggestions, I guess. What to do<\/h2><\/li><\/ul>First of all, read CAREFULLY everything what's mentioned above.<\/li>Second, make sure you understand everything. Feel gree to PM me if there's something you can't understand. <\/li>Third, make sure you've checked osu!wiki<\/a>. It has some important Rules\/Guidelines <\/li>Forth, make sure your patterns are READABLE and understandable for players.<\/li><\/ol><\/div>It's just unmoddable the way it is now.<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n iMirai_old<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 56 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n iMirai_old<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-02-28T12:39:25+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n -Bakari- wrote:<\/h4>hello [General]Background mustn't be bigger than 1024x768. Cut this one or find a new one. (Note: it's recommended to use 4:3 BGs)<\/strong>]-I will cut this one<\/span><\/li>Source is DotA<\/strong>, and remove tags. They doesn't make any sense here. -Change it<\/span><\/li>Enable Letterbox during Breaks (Song setup > storyboarding) it's more common for mapset with breaks. -OK<\/span><\/li>use slider tick Rate 2 please, it will fit with music better.I'm wondering if u mean all diffs or one?<\/span><\/li>DO NOT COPY>>PASTE objects from one diff to another.01:47:471 - example (rampage and holy shit diffs have the same pattern here)<\/strong>-I'm a lazy boy and I will remake the copied pattern<\/span><\/li>Use distance snap. Except antijump\/jump patterns. [Rampage] 01:45:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is IMPOSSIBLE to play with Hidden. Rhythm is TOTALLY broken here and it feels weird.<\/strong>-Remake with distance snap<\/span><\/li>Your sliders are the way too fast, imo. Distance between circles is too slow, and sliders are too fast.-use slider tick Rate 2<\/span><\/li>Try to READ osu!wiki it will help you A LOT.<\/strong>Easy<\/a>\/Normal<\/a>\/Hard<\/a>\/Insane<\/a><\/li>mp3 end is kinda weird. did you cut it yourself? <\/li><\/ol>-Maybe I should cut it again<\/span>It doesn't make any sense to give a full mod to this mapset, atm. But I still may leave some constructive suggestions, I guess. What to do<\/h2><\/li><\/ul>First of all, read CAREFULLY everything what's mentioned above.<\/li>Second, make sure you understand everything. Feel gree to PM me if there's something you can't understand. <\/li>Third, make sure you've checked osu!wiki<\/a>. It has some important Rules\/Guidelines <\/li>Forth, make sure your patterns are READABLE and understandable for players.<\/li><\/ol><\/div>It's just unmoddable the way it is now.<\/blockquote>-Thanks for your advice and I'm going to edit it again <\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n moonlightleaf<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,167 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed September 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n moonlightleaf<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-05T10:59:44+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \u4ee5\u4e0b\u662f\u6211\u4e2a\u4eba\u770b\u6cd5,\u5e0c\u671b\u6709\u5e2e\u52a9<\/span><\/span>Double Kill<\/a>00:35:025(3) \u52a0\u4e00\u6b21\u6298\u8fd4<\/span>00:36:410(1) \u5220\u4e86<\/span>00:36:871 note<\/span>00:37:102 note<\/span>00:39:871 note<\/span>00:40:102(1) \u79fb\u52a8\u5230<\/span>00:40:33300:42:871(3) \u51cf\u4e00\u6b21\u6298\u8fd4<\/span>00:44:717 note\u548c\u540e\u9762\u5bf9\u9f50:2note1\u6ed1\u6761\u7ec4\u5408<\/span>00:48:410(6) \u6362\u6210\u65b0\u7684note,\u8fd9\u8fb9\u4f60\u53c2\u8003:(2note1\u6ed1\u6761+2note1\u6ed1\u6761\u4e5f\u5c31\u662f123456)\u540e\u9762\u7684\u6362\u65b0note,\u8fd9\u4e2a6\u662f\u4f8b\u5b50<\/span>00:56:256(1)(2)(3)(4) \u8ddd\u79bb\u8fc7\u5927<\/span>01:08:256(2)(3) 2\u548c3\u7684\u8ddd\u79bb\u8bf7\u53c2\u8003<\/span>01:07:333(1)(2) \uff0c\u540e\u9762\u51e0\u4e2a\u4e5f\u4e00\u6837<\/span>01:29:948(5)(6) \u8ddd\u79bb\u8c03\u6574<\/span>01:49:333(3) \u52a0\u4e00\u6b21\u6298\u8fd4\u8bd5\u8bd5<\/span> \u8bf7\u5728\u6700\u540e\u7684\u8f6c\u76d8\u5b8c\u4ee5\u540e \u52a0\u4e00\u6761\u7ea2\u7ebf\u7ed3\u675fMP3\u7ed3\u675f\u540e\u9762\u52a0\u6de1\u51fa\u6548\u679c,\u5c31\u662f\u97f3\u4e50\u6162\u6162\u53d8\u5c0f\uff0c\u6700\u540e\u6d88\u5931kika \u8bf7\u52a0\u4e0a\u7ed9\u4e00\u4e9bnote\u548c\u6ed1\u6761\u6dfb\u52a0\u6253\u51fb\u97f3\u6548<\/span><\/div><\/div><\/span>Rampage<\/a>00:36:871\u8fd9\u4e00\u6bb5\u7684\u91cd\u53e0 \u62c6\u5427<\/span>01:22:102\u540c\u4e0a<\/span>01:41:486(1)\u548cDoubli Kill\u4e00\u6837 \u6ce8\u610fnote\u7684\u6392\u5e8f\uff0c\u6539\u62104 \u4e0d\u8981\u4e2d\u95f4\u62c6(\u6bd4\u5982\u540c\u4e00\u79cd\u8282\u594f \u524d\u9762\u662f1234\uff0c\u540e\u9762\u672c\u8be5\u662f1234\u7684\uff0c\u5f04\u62101231)<\/span>01:51:179\u8fd9\u91cc\u8bbe\u7f6e\u8f6c\u76d8<\/span>\u540c\u6837 kika\u90a3\u4e9b\u90fd\u6ca1\u6709 \u53c2\u7167 Double Kill\u7684\u84dd\u5b57\u90e8\u5206<\/span><\/div><\/div>\u6bcf\u4e2a\u96be\u5ea6\u7684<\/span>(\u7ea2\u7ebf\u8bf7\u5bf9\u9f50\uff0c\u7ed3\u675f\u4f4d\u7f6e\u76f8\u540c\uff0ckika\u76f8\u540c)<\/span>\u4e0d\u61c2\u5f97\u5730\u65b9\u6e38\u620f\u91cc\u627e\u6211,\u6211\u57fa\u672c\u4f1a\u5728\u7ebf<\/span><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n iMirai_old<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 56 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n iMirai_old<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-03-05T12:34:48+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n moonlightleaf wrote:<\/h4>\u4ee5\u4e0b\u662f\u6211\u4e2a\u4eba\u770b\u6cd5,\u5e0c\u671b\u6709\u5e2e\u52a9<\/span><\/span>Double Kill<\/a>00:35:025(3) \u52a0\u4e00\u6b21\u6298\u8fd4<\/span>00:36:410(1) \u5220\u4e86<\/span>\u2014\u2014\u6211\u91cd\u505a\u4e86\u4e00\u4e0b<\/span>00:36:871 note<\/span>00:37:102 note<\/span>00:39:871 note<\/span>\u2014\u2014Accepted<\/span>00:40:102(1) \u79fb\u52a8\u5230<\/span>00:40:333\u2014\u2014Accepted<\/span>00:42:871(3) \u51cf\u4e00\u6b21\u6298\u8fd4<\/span>Accepted\uff0c\u540c\u65f6\u52a0\u4e86\u4e00\u4e2aNote<\/span>00:44:717 note\u548c\u540e\u9762\u5bf9\u9f50:2note1\u6ed1\u6761\u7ec4\u5408<\/span>00:48:410(6) \u6362\u6210\u65b0\u7684note,\u8fd9\u8fb9\u4f60\u53c2\u8003:(2note1\u6ed1\u6761+2note1\u6ed1\u6761\u4e5f\u5c31\u662f123456)\u540e\u9762\u7684\u6362\u65b0note,\u8fd9\u4e2a6\u662f\u4f8b\u5b50<\/span>\u2014\u2014\u8fd9\u4e00\u6bb5\u65f6\u8fc7\u6e21\u6bb5\uff0c\u611f\u89c94\u4e2a\u4e00\u7ec4\u6bd4\u8f83\u9002\u5408\u65cb\u5f8b:D<\/span>00:56:256(1)(2)(3)(4) \u8ddd\u79bb\u8fc7\u5927<\/span>\u2014\u2014\u51cf\u5c0f\u96be\u5ea6<\/span>01:08:256(2)(3) 2\u548c3\u7684\u8ddd\u79bb\u8bf7\u53c2\u8003<\/span>01:07:333(1)(2) \uff0c\u540e\u9762\u51e0\u4e2a\u4e5f\u4e00\u6837<\/span> 612ph