{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Verdisphena<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 4,240 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2010<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Verdisphena<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-07-28T22:42:05+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Oni<\/strong>00:00:218 (1) - D00:00:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - d k ddd d k d sounds better00:01:805 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ 00:03:075 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - ^00:05:298 (35) - K00:06:568 (44) - ^00:07:838 (58) - D00:09:267 - dd00:10:378 (70) - D00:20:538 - D00:58:798 (54) - D02:26:431 ~ 02:40:402 - I don't like this part, sounds very irregular and most of the notes are just randoms dons and kats. You better remap this section Muzu<\/strong>Nada, mancu pro<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n -Kazu-<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 687 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed June 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n -Kazu-<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-07-29T21:10:54+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Verdisphena wrote:<\/h4>Oni<\/strong>00:00:218 (1) - D ok :3<\/span>00:00:535 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - d k ddd d k d sounds better ok :3<\/span>00:01:805 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ ok :3<\/span>00:03:075 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - ^ I changed the pattern too,but a little different,because i dont like to make this so repetitive<\/span>00:05:298 (35) - K ok :3<\/span>00:06:568 (44) - ^ok :3<\/span>00:07:838 (58) - Dok :3<\/span> 00:09:267 - dd ok :3<\/span>00:10:378 (70) - Dok :3<\/span>00:20:538 - D ok :3<\/span>00:58:798 (54) - D ok :3<\/span>02:26:431 ~ 02:40:402 - I don't like this part, sounds very irregular and most of the notes are just randoms dons and kats. You better remap this section ok :3, i thought i was a little random ,too ,so i remapped it,i think is a little better now<\/span><\/blockquote>Thx for modding Verdis http:\/\/puu.sh\/3OQ5r.osu<\/a> > LinkPD : \u30fd(*\u2267\u03c9\u2266)\uff89 \u2605\u2605 \u30fd(\uff65\u03c9\uff65\u309e)<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n XinCrin<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,845 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n XinCrin<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-07-29T23:50:25+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n A special mod for Xanandra ~<\/strong><\/span> General<\/strong><\/span><\/u><\/li><\/ul>Intenta agregar mas tags al mapa , talvez con respecto a la cancion o al grupoEasy<\/strong><\/span><\/u><\/li>Deberias poner un Spinner en esta dificultad , ya sabes , para diferenciar en los puntajes<\/strong><\/li>00:28:635 (4) Estoy seguro que deberias poner un NewCombo aqui , porque siguiendo tus patrones cortos y por consistencia con lo anterior debe ir uno aqui<\/li>00:33:080 (2) Intenta acomodar esta nota un poco mas arriba , ya que al momento de jugarlo , una peque\u00f1a parte del circle se sale del \u00e1rea . Y si la diff es jugada con HR , ese circleser\u00e1 dificil de hacer clic porque estar\u00e1 debajo de la scorebar<\/li>00:48:956 (1) Remueve el clap que pusiste al final de este slider , no suena para nada bien en mi opinion , deja solo el whistle . Posiblemente trataste de similiar el drum que suena por ahi , pero si lo notas bien , esedrum suena a partir del downbeat que sigue<\/li>00:55:941 (1) Este NC es realmente necesario , podrias eliminarlo . Pero si deseas mantenerlo , no te preocupes . Solo una cosa , talvez un slider con tantos reverses podrias ser algo dificil para los principiantes . No se si podrias cambiarlo . Te recomendaria hacerlo de esta manera . Va a terminar mejor con la musica y ser\u00e1 mas facil para los principiantes<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:58:481 (1) Pon un Finish en el reverse de este slider , para resaltar mejor el comienzo de este kiai time<\/li>01:17:532 (2) Para un mejor flow con (1) , deberias realizar la curva de este slider hacia abajo , moviendo el segundo sliderpoint a x:320 y:160 . Fluir\u00e1 mejor con (1) y (3) en mi opinion<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>01:31:502 (2) Al igual que 00:33:080 (2) , intenta hacer lo contrario , muevelo mas abajo , Est\u00e1 por debajo del scorebar un poco<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>01:54:363 (1) Igual que 00:55:941 (1) . Sinceramente usaste copy\/paste creo xD<\/li>01:56:903 (1) Finish en el reverse de este slider , resaltar\u00e1 mucho el mejor el comienzo del kiai time<\/li>03:28:346 (1) Igual aqui<\/li>03:58:827 (1) Realmente no me gusta como fluye este slider con respecto a (2) . No da un movimiento continuo al cursor , intenta moviendo el segundo slider point a x:244 y:200 . Por cierto usa Grid level 4 , es mejor <\/li>04:01:367 (1) Lo mismo que arriba , pero aqui mueves el segundo sliderpoint a x:372 y:272<\/li>04:03:272 (3) \/ 04:05:812 (3) En mi opinion , estos circles se sienten raros sin el custom clap que te encuentras usando . En mi opinion ser\u00eda mejor si usas el Clap en esos dos circles tambien<\/li>04:09:940 (2) Realmente que un circle termine al costado de un slider , asi como lo hiciste en una easy sobretodo , luce muy mal . Deberias mover el circle al final del slider , osea a x:448 y:276 . Me troleaste un poco , con esos cambios de spacing<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>El Finish suena bien aqu\u00ed , ya que distingue el final de la cancion . Pero ese clap , como que opaca el Finish y lo hace sonar , deberias remover ese clap , sonar\u00e1 mejorNormal<\/strong><\/span><\/u><\/li>Lo mismo que en easy . Deberias poner un Spinner en esta dificultad , para diferenciar en los puntajes<\/strong><\/li>00:09:902 (4) Realmente este slider influye en el flow del cursor , me gustar\u00eda que hagas la curvatura hacia abajo . Fluye mejor<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:41:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) Estos objetos apilados realmente podr\u00eda ser un poco dificil de leer , no es una easy . Pero seria mejor si por lo menos desapilas algunas notas , estar\u00eda mejor en mi opinion<\/li>00:45:622 (7) Este slider realmente no est\u00e1 siguiendo bien el ritmo , tampoco la voz ya que aqui no se logra oir eso . Intenta mover este slider a 00:45:781 , y hacerlo un 1\/2 slider , fluira y sonara mejor en mi opinion<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:45:463 (6) Este circle suena mucho mejor sin ese Clap , remuevelo porfavor<\/li>00:46:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) Como dije mas arriba<\/li>00:58:481 (1) Finish en el reverse de este slider , resaltar\u00e1 mucho el mejor el comienzo del kiai time<\/li>02:02:618 (2) Realmente yo disfruto mas este circle , si lo mueves a x:304 y:92 . Si deseas mantenerlo , no te preocupes <\/li>02:06:746 (5) Hmm . . . No haz pensado que talvez este slider con varios reverses , podria ser un poco dificil ? . Deberias intentar de hacerlo , de alguna manera mas comprensible para esta diff <\/li>02:35:004 (5) S\u00e9 que no es muy necesario , pero ser\u00eda mejor si pones un NC aqui . Ya que siento que ese combo , est\u00e1 demasiado largo D:<\/li>03:13:423 (4) Me gustaria que la curvatura de este slider apunte hacia abajo . Da un mejor movimiento del cursor en mi opinion<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>Sieg's Hard<\/strong><\/u><\/span>In my opinion OD -1 , is better . For consistency with HP<\/strong><\/li>00:19:268 (1) This slider is ignoring a bit the music . Try finishing this slider in 00:19:586 and then add a 1\/2 slider in 00:19:745 . It's will be better imo<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:23:555 (3,4) This pattern sincerely doesn't flow too good imo . Could you try it to do differently?<\/li>00:26:254 (x) You should add a circle here. For consistency with other places (00:23:079|00:28:476 <\/li>00:36:573 (1,2,3,4,5) In my point of view , this jump is ignoring a lot of music. Maybe you tried to do something fun, but you forget the music <\/li>01:37:852 (7) A NewCombo, could be better in this slider. Because here the voice spreads, and a NC here , it would highlight better<\/li>01:48:013 (4) This slider is ignoring, a part that sounds great (01:48:171 ) . Try this , sounds really better<\/span>SPOILER<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>01:51:188 (6) Fix this slider please xD<\/li>04:18:036 (1) As in 00:19:268 (1)<\/li><\/ol>Realmente estoy algo cansado . Talvez Insane la modee despues , pero por ahora dejo el mod hasta ahi y te dejo unas cuantas estrellas. La cancion est\u00e1 un poco larga xD<\/strong><\/span><\/span>Buena Suerte Xanandra ! <\/strong><\/center><\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Kyshiro<\/a>\n\n \n Elite Mapper\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 1,642 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed January 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Kyshiro<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-07-29T23:55:10+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hai, sorry that I took so long >: Genuinely haven't had much time {insert more generic excuses here}Insane<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/u>00:22:761 (1) - Would be fun if you could make a small square pattern by moving this to x:343 y:336 This makes it slightly easier to hit this jump too<\/li>01:16:579 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point<\/li>01:34:677 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Sure this pattern is fun, but it's pretty much a copy paste of the previous pattern, would be great if you could make something different here<\/li>02:13:572 (4,5) - since you're following the vocals here, it'd be more appropriate to switch these, placing the slider at 02:13:572 - and the note at 02:14:049 -<\/li>03:26:917 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point<\/li><\/ol>I love this.Sieg's Hard<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/u>00:08:949 (5,1) - These jumps are way too hard for a hard diff imo, I don't think you'll change this but I would really like to see these jump a bit smaller (The jumps that start from the sliders are generally easier to hit so I suppose they should be fine)<\/li>00:11:489 (4,1) - ^<\/li>00:12:759 (4,1) - ^ Etc.<\/li>00:51:337 (1,2) - I'd rather see this stacked properly<\/li>01:01:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - This curve could be a lot smoother<\/li>01:31:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Try to move (1) to x:307 y:127<\/li>01:51:188 (6) - Had a hard time reading this while playing, it'd be better to read if you'd make a 1\/1 slider out of this, or putting a note at 01:51:188 - and 01:51:346 -<\/li>02:17:541 - Add a note here<\/li>03:22:631 (5) - Would be cool if this slidere were symmetric, the last anchor needs to be in the center of the end circle<\/li>03:28:346 - Add note<\/li>03:28:505 - ^<\/li>03:48:349 - Same here, Maybe add a 1\/1 slider instead, or 2 notes, placing the other one at 03:48:667 - ofcourse<\/li>04:10:257 (4,1) - Same thing with the jumps from here, I think it would be better if the jumps were a bit smaller<\/li><\/ol>Normal<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/u>00:00:218 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why is this all copy paste, copying a whole pattern is a bad idea imo<\/li>00:05:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^<\/li>00:31:175 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Lacks creativity, feels like you've done this just to finish it asap.^This occurs more often in the song, I won't be pointing out every single thing as it's pretty obvious what's copy paste and what should be changed<\/li>01:16:579 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point<\/li>02:54:372 (1,2) - Fix this blanket please<\/li>03:09:137 (2) - Too unexpected to have 2 repeats, Try placing 2 1\/2 sliders instead<\/li>03:24:218 - add a note<\/li>03:26:917 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point<\/li><\/ol>Easy<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/u>00:10:854 (1,2,3,4,1) - Might be a bit nazi but i'd really like to see blankets here<\/li>00:17:205 (2) - Add a finish instead of a whistle on the slider end<\/li>00:18:475 (1) - ^<\/li>00:59:751 (2) - Feels like all the 1\/1 sliders like these in the kiai should be 1\/1 earlier, maybe try to vary a bit more, try adding notes instead of sliders<\/li>01:58:173 (2) - This is just a copy paste of the first kiai, I don't approve of this<\/li>01:16:579 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point<\/li>03:26:917 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point<\/li>04:09:146 - Unsnapped uninherited timing point<\/li><\/ol>The normal and the easy lack creativity, I suggest you take a closer look at these diffs and consider whether copy pasting whole parts is actually necessary<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Sieg<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,981 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed February 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Sieg<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-07-30T04:41:00+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/span>SPOILER<\/a>XinCrin wrote:<\/h4>[*]Sieg's Hard<\/strong><\/u><\/span>In my opinion OD -1 , is better . For consistency with HP<\/strong>I prefer to rise hp better than OD6\\AR8 with OD6 this will be too easy to SS<\/span>[*]00:19:268 (1) This slider is ignoring a bit the music . Try finishing this slider in 00:19:586 and then add a 1\/2 slider in 00:19:745 . It's will be better imoThis is like transition to next section<\/span>[*]00:23:555 (3,4) This pattern sincerely doesn't flow too good imo . Could you try it to do differently?changed<\/span>[*]00:26:254 (x) You should add a circle here. For consistency with other places (00:23:079|00:28:476 But they shouldn't be consistent, rhythm is a bit different. <\/span>[*]00:36:573 (1,2,3,4,5) In my point of view , this jump is ignoring a lot of music. Maybe you tried to do something fun, but you forget the music I don't consider this as jump at all just extended spacing, man this 1\\1 notes<\/span>[*]01:37:852 (7) A NewCombo, could be better in this slider. Because here the voice spreads, and a NC here , it would highlight betterokay<\/span>[*]01:48:013 (4) This slider is ignoring, a part that sounds great (01:48:171 ) . Try this , sounds really betteryep<\/span>[*]01:51:188 (6) Fix this slider please xDoh, done <\/span>[*]04:18:036 (1) As in 00:19:268 (1)same<\/span><\/blockquote><\/div><\/div>Thanks XinCrin :3<\/span>SPOILER<\/a>Kyshiro wrote:<\/h4>Sieg's Hard<\/span><\/span><\/strong><\/u>00:08:949 (5,1) - These jumps are way too hard for a hard diff imo, I don't think you'll change this but I would really like to see these jump a bit smaller (The jumps that start from the sliders are generally easier to hit so I suppose they should be fine)yep, actually this works fine because this jump on slider<\/span><\/li>00:11:489 (4,1) - ^<\/li>00:12:759 (4,1) - ^ Etc.<\/li>00:51:337 (1,2) - I'd rather see this stacked properlyyep<\/span><\/li>01:01:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - This curve could be a lot smootherchanged<\/span><\/li>01:31:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Try to move (1) to x:307 y:127nice<\/span><\/li> 6xh4c