{"content":"\n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,090 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-04-26T06:39:29+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Wolf wrote:<\/h4>Hi.From my Modding Queue.General<\/h2>Everything seems in order.<\/li><\/ul>Easy Single<\/h2>00:37:562 (2) - Would be nice if you move this circle a bit more to the left since it would improve spacing with 00:34:954 (4) - making things much more cleaner. (Make sure to do a spacing recheck in previous and next objects when making changes of course). \u2714<\/span><\/span>How it is<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/span>How it could be<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:53:736 (1) - Pretty much the same thing as above, would be nice if this circle don't touch with 00:51:128 (3) - . Try moving it down on the grid. \u2714<\/span><\/span>Example<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>01:15:127 (1) - Not something wrong, but I honestly think you could have made this slider a bit better. If you keep in mind this is the only slider you made in a v-shape, you might really want to change this here. \u2714<\/span><\/span>Example<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>02:00:519 (1) - Fix spacing, it should be around 0,70x, not in 0,66x. \u2714<\/span><\/li>02:25:041 (1,2,3) - Could have give them a bit more spacing from each other, it looks kinda bad when they are close together like that, also make a spacing recheck here. (Don't mind the approach lines on the screenshots, I've only reduced the time of to get all of them together on the print). \u2714<\/span><\/span>How it is<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/span>How it could be<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li><\/ol>Heart Jolter<\/h2>00:19:823 (1) - I wouldn't make the first object with two arrows, it looks kinda unnecessary and it ruins the flow of the song. Try splitting the slider into two others. \u2714<\/span><\/span>Example<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:32:084 (1,2,3) - Feels a bit harsh to hit them because the change of white to red tick and the considerable time between them. You could have placed something in the white ticks to improve gameplay. \u2714<\/span><\/span>Example<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li>00:41:214 - Why no object here? I understand you followed the vocals, but adding something between them might improve flow, and you can clearly hear there's a beat there. The same applies for 00:42:258 - 00:49:562 - 00:57:910 - 00:58:954 - 01:17:214 - 02:04:693 - 02:05:736 - 02:11:997 - 02:40:693 - . There's no need to add in all of them of course, but this is for you take a look on how many points there are without a beat that could have been added. ;^;<\/span><\/li>01:01:041 (5) - Change whistle for clap like you did on your two next diffs for a consistency. \u2714<\/span>03:37:301 (2,3) - I honestly think you should move them to the left, it looks pretty bad when playing here. \u2714<\/span><\/span>How it is<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/span>How it could be<\/a><\/div><\/div><\/li><\/ol>Party Time!!<\/h2>00:24:780 (4,6) - Would be nice if they were perfectly stacked. Which means placing both of them on the same location in the grid (x=184 y:124). \u2714<\/span><\/li>00:32:606 - Consider adding object for improving flow. The same applies for 00:33:649 - and 00:34:693 - . \u2714<\/span><\/li>00:36:519 - Also why no object here? Q_Q<\/span><\/li>03:19:301 (2,3,4,5) - Would be nice if this part was consistent with your previous patterns. You've made a sudden change adding just a few circles\/sliders in a part where there's no point in doing that, since the song is clearly going. I recommend taking a look here.Nothing much to add here. :\/<\/span><\/li><\/ol>Ready too, Bingo<\/h2>Streams on this diff could have used a lower distance spacing.I couldn't find anything to poke here, good job on jumps.<\/li><\/ul>Good luck there.Here, have a star:<\/blockquote>Thank you for modding, and thank you again for the star~ <\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n HelloSCV<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,490 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed April 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n HelloSCV<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-05-02T14:47:42+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n helloEasy Single<\/strong> nothing<\/div>Heart Jolter<\/strong> i think some parts of this diff is overmapped ( like 01:09:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - here )<\/li><\/ol> 02:04:171 (7) - NC 03:38:606 (6) - ^ , 03:39:388 (1) - delete NC<\/div>Party Time!!<\/strong> 00:35:736 (2) - little bit stacked with previous slider, try to unstack? 00:48:258 (3) - ^ 00:51:649 (4,5) - ^ 01:04:693 (1,2,3) - try to same rhythm with 01:06:780 (1,2,3,4,5) - this? both parts have similar music sounds 01:12:780 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 01:44:606 (4) - this 2 repeat slider can cause confusing for players imo 01:57:388 (5) - stack problem 02:28:171 (1,2) - you may know here 02:33:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since you didn't add some jumps like this part, i think you need to keep consistense here too<\/div>Ready too, Bingo<\/strong> 00:27:519 (6) - delete this note? don't need this 01:05:214 (4,5,6,7) - i think this square jump isn't really good, since DS is too high and doesn't fit well with song cosidering change this pattern 01:12:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ 01:33:910 (13) - NC 02:02:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm http:\/\/puu.sh\/2Lo0N.jpg<\/a> 02:14:606 (2,8) - stack each other perfectly 02:25:041 (1,2,3,4) - another pattern problem here 02:57:388 (13) - NC 03:14:606 - not used green line 03:22:432 (13,14) - delete these and move slider to 03:22:433 (14) - here and add 2 repeats 03:27:128 (1,2,3,4) - pattern :\/ 03:34:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ 03:42:258 (9) - NC 03:42:780 (1) - delete NC<\/div>Good luck~<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 2,090 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed August 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Topic Starter\n <\/span>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Cerulean Veyron<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-05-03T05:10:13+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n HelloSCV wrote:<\/h4>helloEasy Single<\/strong> nothing<\/div>Heart Jolter<\/strong> i think some parts of this diff is overmapped ( like 01:09:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - here ) ohh.. okay<\/span><\/li><\/ol> 02:04:171 (7) - NC \u2714<\/span> 03:38:606 (6) - ^ , 03:39:388 (1) - delete NC no change ;^;<\/span><\/div>Party Time!!<\/strong> 00:35:736 (2) - little bit stacked with previous slider, try to unstack? \u2714<\/span> 00:48:258 (3) - ^ \u2714<\/span> 00:51:649 (4,5) - ^ \u2714<\/span> 01:04:693 (1,2,3) - try to same rhythm with 01:06:780 (1,2,3,4,5) - this? both parts have similar music sounds Don't know what to do with it.. but I'll change it anyways :\/<\/span> 01:12:780 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^<\/span> 01:44:606 (4) - this 2 repeat slider can cause confusing for players imo \u2714<\/span> 01:57:388 (5) - stack problem \u2714<\/span> 02:28:171 (1,2) - you may know here \u2714<\/span> 02:33:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since you didn't add some jumps like this part, i think you need to keep consistense here too o_o<\/span><\/div>Ready too, Bingo<\/strong> 00:27:519 (6) - delete this note? don't need this \u2714<\/span> 01:05:214 (4,5,6,7) - i think this square jump isn't really good, since DS is too high and doesn't fit well with song cosidering change this pattern okay<\/span> 01:12:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ no change ;_;<\/span> 01:33:910 (13) - NC \u2714<\/span> 02:02:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm http:\/\/puu.sh\/2Lo0N.jpg<\/a> \u2714<\/span> 02:14:606 (2,8) - stack each other perfectly \u2714<\/span> 02:25:041 (1,2,3,4) - another pattern problem here No change, <\/span>but i have something on my head -.-<\/span> 02:57:388 (13) - NC \u2714<\/span> 03:14:606 - not used green line Huurrr...<\/span> 03:22:432 (13,14) - delete these and move slider to 03:22:433 (14) - here and add 2 repeats \u2714<\/span> 03:27:128 (1,2,3,4) - pattern :\/ same as 02:25:041 (1,2,3,4) -<\/span> 03:34:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ No change ;_;<\/span> 03:42:258 (9) - NC 03:42:780 (1) - delete NC \u2714<\/span><\/div>Good luck~<\/blockquote>Thank you for modding~ ^^<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Aeonian Sonder<\/a>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 973 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed May 2012<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Aeonian Sonder<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-05-05T16:26:28+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Current Progess: 57.2%Yeah, around this time of the year in America, school REALLY like to pressure their children...<\/div>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n Hinsvar<\/a>\n\n \n osu! Alumni\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/a>\n\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n <\/span>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n \n \n \n 3,826 posts\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n\n \n ed December 2011<\/strong>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n \n \n \n Hinsvar<\/a>\n\n \n 2013-05-06T12:13:59+00:00<\/time>\n <\/a>\n <\/div>\n <\/div>\n\n <\/div>\n\n \n \n Hi; mod here.*Bolded<\/strong> = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red<\/span> = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions\/rants; blue<\/span> = Notes\/advices to avoid\/fix repeated problems.>GeneralThe no-video link isn't available on the beatmap's listing...<\/li>Just use claps every second and fourth white tick of a stanza on most parts of this song (verses, especially).<\/span><\/li>The difficulties' names might make players confused because they can't differ which diff is Insane, Hard, or Normal.<\/span><\/li>Why are the break times between difficulties different to each other? It's really recommended to make them consistent.<\/strong><\/li>Try offset 3158 (+25)? The objects fit with the song way better using that offset for me.<\/span><\/li><\/ol>>Easy Single00:19:823 - 00:26:606 - ...You don't need all those green (inherited) timing points there if you just want to switch between samplesets. Just keep the first two, and then use per-object sampleset (just choose a circle or part of a slider, and then choose the sampleset on the \"Sampleset\" dropdown menu in the left of the editor screen).<\/strong><\/li>00:23:475 (4) - 4t4s72